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I liked how it wasn't the wolf that was evil, but the "priestess of the moon".

loved the way how you gave the story from the chose of two different kinds of beast,but it was kind of nice that in your tale the wolf was the helpful one and the mother moon was the villain.

the wolf ending, the human father was a bit obnoxious due to his weird overreactions about women.

Yes, that human ending could not be that different, as the story was showing that humans are really obnoxious. But we may forgive that father, he was upset because he had lost his beloved little daughter (worse for him: she had just become the major symbol of that matriarchal society). In my conversations with the proofreaders, I remembered that the way the girl was looking for a protective father, when she met the wolf and the soldier, was signaling that she and her father were very close to each other. I don't know if it's easy to understand, but I believe in the end the human father was crying for his missing daughter, and not (exactly) because he was living in a society ruled by women.