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thedarkdefender
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by thedarkdefender » Tue May 28, 2013 12:35 pm
"She and I" is a short KN about a girl and a boy.
The story will be told by the guy's perspective.
"Oh! Another KN! I wonder what will make it so special?"
The answer is.....
nothing, really.
This KN will feature the following:
>Original art, drawn by me. They are just scanned traditional drawings because, two words: Ihaveno tablet.
Screenshot:
Download link:
http://www.mediafire.com/?86mkdaauu3gaomx
The main reason why this KN was made is to test if I can actually do a decent GUI(though it's not all done).
The second reason is to pass some time while waiting for my laptop to start on my "real deals".
I hope you'll like it, somehow~
Please do throw some feedback.
Credits:
Music - Tam Music Factory

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by merdeamour » Wed May 29, 2013 6:44 am
I think the GUI is beautiful--simple and elegant. That's about the only thing I can give feedback on right now, as you haven't provided a plot... Downloading it right now~
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by thedarkdefender » Wed May 29, 2013 10:01 am
I don't think there really is a plot. Just a short story about a boy and a girl. It's not a love story though.
Thank you!
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by merdeamour » Thu May 30, 2013 5:28 am
I liked the story--and your prose flowed well. I spotted a few mistakes like switching from past to present tense, but the narration was good and drew me in

Again, congratulations on this! I loved the GUI, too (: I'm looking forward to your future VNs.
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by thedarkdefender » Thu May 30, 2013 6:49 am
Thank you! I do admit that I have some difficulties regarding that one >.< but I'll work on it.
Again, thank you

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