She and I [A KN that is quite short]

Finished games are posted here, once they've been tested and are ready for wide release.
Post Reply
Message
Author
User avatar
thedarkdefender
Regular
Posts: 97
Joined: Fri Jan 13, 2012 11:13 am
Projects: TBTR
Organization: Clockwork Cafe
Location: Narnia
Contact:

She and I [A KN that is quite short]

#1 Post by thedarkdefender » Tue May 28, 2013 12:35 pm

"She and I" is a short KN about a girl and a boy.
The story will be told by the guy's perspective.

"Oh! Another KN! I wonder what will make it so special?"
The answer is..... nothing, really.

This KN will feature the following:
>Original art, drawn by me. They are just scanned traditional drawings because, two words: Ihaveno tablet.

Screenshot:

Image

Download link:
http://www.mediafire.com/?86mkdaauu3gaomx

The main reason why this KN was made is to test if I can actually do a decent GUI(though it's not all done).
The second reason is to pass some time while waiting for my laptop to start on my "real deals".

I hope you'll like it, somehow~

Please do throw some feedback.

Credits:
Music - Tam Music Factory

:oops:
Image

User avatar
merdeamour
Veteran
Posts: 307
Joined: Sun Apr 21, 2013 10:23 pm
Projects: Taleweaver's Curse
Location: Philippines
Contact:

Re: She and I [A KN that is quite short]

#2 Post by merdeamour » Wed May 29, 2013 6:44 am

I think the GUI is beautiful--simple and elegant. That's about the only thing I can give feedback on right now, as you haven't provided a plot... Downloading it right now~
What would life be if we had no courage to attempt anything?
-Vincent van Gogh
I manage a blog, Another Otome Diary where I give my two cents on otomes I've played. Check it out, or let me know if you want a game of yours reviewed!

User avatar
thedarkdefender
Regular
Posts: 97
Joined: Fri Jan 13, 2012 11:13 am
Projects: TBTR
Organization: Clockwork Cafe
Location: Narnia
Contact:

Re: She and I [A KN that is quite short]

#3 Post by thedarkdefender » Wed May 29, 2013 10:01 am

I don't think there really is a plot. Just a short story about a boy and a girl. It's not a love story though.
Thank you!
Image

User avatar
merdeamour
Veteran
Posts: 307
Joined: Sun Apr 21, 2013 10:23 pm
Projects: Taleweaver's Curse
Location: Philippines
Contact:

Re: She and I [A KN that is quite short]

#4 Post by merdeamour » Thu May 30, 2013 5:28 am

I liked the story--and your prose flowed well. I spotted a few mistakes like switching from past to present tense, but the narration was good and drew me in :D Again, congratulations on this! I loved the GUI, too (: I'm looking forward to your future VNs.
What would life be if we had no courage to attempt anything?
-Vincent van Gogh
I manage a blog, Another Otome Diary where I give my two cents on otomes I've played. Check it out, or let me know if you want a game of yours reviewed!

User avatar
thedarkdefender
Regular
Posts: 97
Joined: Fri Jan 13, 2012 11:13 am
Projects: TBTR
Organization: Clockwork Cafe
Location: Narnia
Contact:

Re: She and I [A KN that is quite short]

#5 Post by thedarkdefender » Thu May 30, 2013 6:49 am

Thank you! I do admit that I have some difficulties regarding that one >.< but I'll work on it.
Again, thank you :)
Image

Post Reply

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users