What is this place...? What is this... this monster...?
A short, kinetic novel about feeling isolated and alone in new surroundings. It's approx 1,100 words so will last you around 10mins. It was written and created entirely in one day! I really like to do these very short projects now and then because it feels good to have something whole and complete to motivate you.
That was... breath taking.
I forgot that it's a small novel and for a moment I was exited about it so much that when I saw the "credits" I thought that it's just an opening or something and I was like "that's exiting!, OK here we begin"
THE END...
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ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!... it ended.
that was great writing really, a piece of art! keep it up
I liked it a lot. As you promise, the VN conveys the feeling you wanted.
The music helps a lot, also.
At every clue I was thinking (is she human? Isn't she? The title says "EarthGirl"... :S )
I like the font, too, neat and elegant.
Go on creating!
Thanks very much Kessie! Yeah it's always a challenge to do so, I'd have liked to have added a bit more polish and some more visuals to the game, but it is what it is. Thanks for checking it out!
Oh my. This was a great little KN. Your prose was just wonderful, and, although you made a few grammatical mistakes (like switching from present tense to past), it didn't distract me from being entranced by the story. This proves that a visual novel doesn't really need a ton of graphics just to make it good. The story bolstered it up well enough.
Thank you for the minutes of enjoyment this brought me~!
What would life be if we had no courage to attempt anything?
-Vincent van Gogh
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I went ahead and played it! It was short, but pretty easy to get into since the writing was very descriptive and the music u chose in the background complemented the game very well.
I do have one spoiler-like question, though:
So was the main protagonist an Earth girl or an alien? I was thinking that it was an alien since I thought the main protagonist had said that he or she was on the planet Earth to do research, etc.