Twist - Majapahit (Indonesian Version)

[Kawamata Hiruma]

This is my First Visual Novel

Focusing on the epic history of Java (Indonesia), This VN will give you valid informations about how the great empire of Majapahit born and collapse. Also, you can add your knowledge by searching the 12 kings, and read their biography.

There are 3 mode in this game
- Cerita Majapahit (Story of Majapahit)
You can enjoy the story about how Majapahit reign and why this kingdom collapse. Just read and follow the story, for
there are no choice option in this mode.
- Temukan Raja (Find the Kings)
In this mode, you will be given task to find 12 kings of Majapahit, by selecting the answers option from the narrator.
When you find one of the kings, you are be able to read his/her biography.
- Galeri (Gallery)
In this mode, you can enjoy reading many biography that you collect, including biography of 3 additional character
and the temples of Majapahit in Java. (achieve by finding all the kings)


PROBLEMS
- This game is the Indonesian Version. Due to my lack of english, It's hard for me to convert the language into english in
short time. Therefore, I need any help that I can get to translate this game into English Version.
- The Music is not mine, I can't make background music, so I pick up Phantom of the Opera from Tokyo Philharmonic, and
some BGM from Seal and Ragnarok Online. I DO NOT CLAIM THEM AS MY OWN. (I show them in credit)

Images

Gajah Mada
Mei Xin

Screenshots

DOWNLOAD INDONESIAN VERSION
WINDOWS
http://www.mediafire.com/download/2xyno ... -win32.zip

[lemonscent]

I'm not going to play this since I don't speak Indonesian lol, but I like the art and the idea behind the VN:)

Anyway, I don't know about Tokyo Philharmonic and Seal, but I'm 99% sure you aren't supposed to take bgms from Ragnarok Online... unless you got permission through email or something, of course. Even if it's not a commercial game, it's best to use music from creative commons;;.

[ngareci]

Majapahit! I will definitely play this! *big grin

Jadi inget game majapahit online

It's a lot of characters you've got there..
And I will give you my opinion after finishing this~

[Kawamata Hiruma]

lemonscent
Anyway, I don't know about Tokyo Philharmonic and Seal, but I'm 99% sure you aren't supposed to take bgms from Ragnarok Online... unless you got permission through email or something, of course. Even if it's not a commercial game, it's best to use music from creative commons;;.

Yeah, that's my bad . for my next project I will use music from creative commons .
for this game, if someday the english version is made, I will change the background music to.

ngareci
Majapahit! I will definitely play this!

Enjoy the Game .
This game is finish when you collect all 12 kings.

[azureXtwilight]

It's really a quite brave move to show off a game to an english-based community when your game isn't english
I kinda wish this game is made in english as well so people can understand more about Indonesian culture. Nevertheless, I will play it.

Thanks for creating this!

[Kawamata Hiruma]

you're welcome

I just wonder, what if Indonesia have it's own historical fantasy game like Sengoku Jidai and Romance of Three Kingdom.
So that indonesian people, mostly it's young generation will more appreciate into it's history. And as we knew, Epic Majapahit empire is at same level with Mahabharat, Three Kingdom, And Japan Shogun empire.

[rin966]

Wow, it's Majapahit~

It's a good surprise seeing another Indonesia themed story around the forum.... and I wonder why you didn't create the English version of it but it will be a good way to promote our culture (yeah, I'm Indonesian as well) to the world

And since the first time I read the biography my eyes hurt because of the typo, and it isn't Singhasari it is Singasari.

[Kawamata Hiruma]

rin966
I wonder why you didn't create the English version of it but it will be a good way to promote our culture (yeah, I'm Indonesian as well) to the world

Umm yeah, I've been think the same things. At first time I create this VN, my priority target are Indonesian's gamer Mostly the VN ones. But after this game released, I've got many request to make the english version. And yes, I'll make it.
But, after my next project.
and I still try to find some free background music for the english version. ehehehehe (need some advices here)

rn966
And since the first time I read the biography my eyes hurt because of the typo, and it isn't Singhasari it is Singasari.

About the font size and typo. well,...that's my bad. I want to give so many information in small space. Iam sorry...
And this is the unique one about this game. Even it's the Indonesian version, but in the name of some character or kingdom, I used the literature from Chinese Chronic.
Maybe you found some strange name or similar name, like Singhasari (Singasari), Kung Ta Bhu Mi (Kertabumi), and Jin Bun (Raden Patah). Don't worry, that's just chinese accent. Same thing with Jibril (Arabian Accent), and Gabriel (English accent).

[ngareci]

I've played it!
It was a very informative, but not in the best story-telling format.
I thought we can be an anonymous player and be part of the game, so we can get the feeling better.
Or you can give some sfx for dramatic effect..
But I like the character design! You've made the characters looks good!
Good job!

[D'd'D]

and I still try to find some free background music for the english version. ehehehehe (need some advices here)

Try googling Zero Project. As long as it's non-commercial it's free to use! There's even a license. Their music is splendid :3

[dobod]

Wow, there are many Indonesian here..

Character Design and the concept are good i think.

Are you creating this by yourself?

i'll add this to my download list

[Kawamata Hiruma]

ngareci
I've played it!
It was a very informative, but not in the best story-telling format.
I thought we can be an anonymous player and be part of the game, so we can get the feeling better.
Or you can give some sfx for dramatic effect..

Thanks for playing,
for the music and sound, I'll try aplicate more sfx in my next game.
by the way, you got biography of Mada, Rekta, And Mei Xin, don't you?

D'd'D
Try googling Zero Project. As long as it's non-commercial it's free to use! There's even a license. Their music is splendid :3

That's the big help. Thank you...so much

dobod
Character Design and the concept are good i think.
Are you creating this by yourself?

Yes, I create this game myself from character design, game concept, and programming. Except for information data (I collect them with my friends), the Background (because i try the mate painting, in it end badly), and music.


This is my Deviantart : http://hkawamata.deviantart.com/

[runeraccoon]

Wow, Indonesian-made game! Pasti bakal saya mainin~

Sebetulnya anatomi di artworknya agak nyakitin mata, tapi karena temanya Majapahit, The clothing and character design in themselves are amazing, but when we talk about sprites, I would want the arts which are easier to look at. Nevertheless, thank you for your (epic) hard work, I'll be sure to play it!

[LVUER]

I know we're excited since there is an Indonesian game, but since this is an international forum, please use English so everyone understand what you/we're talking about.

[dobod]

just played the game.

Maybe it'll be better if the main character is from inside the story. Mere peasant, soldier or even the king. Or maybe just someone trapped from the ffuture and pave his way to Kingdom (Oda nobuna . lol) that way, i think it will be interesting.

just my opinion.