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"What (or rather, who) I liked most was Emily. Perhaps that's because, deep down, I really enjoy people who are able to speak their mind and act eccentric without care, considering how much my homeland focuses on behaving "normally". Maybe I also don't like demure girls, like Aceline."
Haha, glad you liked one of them, at least. I feel like I like both of them equally, but that's only because I gave birth to them, in a way. :P

"I really enjoyed her route, although her closed eyes grinning sprite just looked like she had a headache. Her head bobbling was a bit distracting."
Oh, was it? Since they only had one pose, I didn't want them to look entirely static. Though, I should've done poses > more outfits, haha.

"The calculus class segment seemed a bit pointless, considering he glossed over it. I'm not sure how to do it different, but personally I'd go for a black screen and then a quick tell, since that seems to be the way to go about "and then time passed" segments. In my mind, anyway."
Yeah, that sounds a lot better. It did feel strange to me, although I didn't have any ideas of how to do a better transition. (I also wanted to reuse the classroom BG, so there's that...)

"(I'm super glad my joke made it in, even if it's lame. :'D)"
It was the best joke in the entire VN, loool.

Michael seems the weakest part of it, to me. I know protagonists in these kinds of games are supposed to be a bit bland, but I do have to wonder what Emily saw in him prior to the story beginning; given his super-aloofness. Besides that, the only thing I remember about his past is that he apparently once hit a girl and Emily doesn't shed any light on her attraction either from what I remember.

"Michael seems the weakest part of it, to me. I know protagonists in these kinds of games are supposed to be a bit bland, but I do have to wonder what Emily saw in him prior to the story beginning; given his super-aloofness."
Yeah, he is. I didn't notice too much until one of my friends pointed it out to me earlier. I believe it's because I had set personalities for Emily and Aceline (since, as you probably know, they're characters I made up from a few years ago) whereas Michael was made up on the spot. I should've put more time into planning, but I was pretty excited to start, so... :P
I will (consciously) keep this in mind for my next work, though. Hopefully the main character won't be so "what kind of person is this?".

"Besides that, the only thing I remember about his past is that he apparently once hit a girl"
Wwwell, that was only included since I thought it was funny. (A lot of stuff I left in 'cause I thought it was funny, if you couldn't tell.)

"Emily doesn't shed any light on her attraction either from what I remember."
Right, my friend from earlier also brought this up. I should've thought about+written about why they both ended up liking him, as well as why he ended up liking the both of them too.

"I also prefer the Emily choice since they actually get to kiss while Aceline, and Michael just go on a date."
Yeah, same here. When I thought about the endings, Emily seemed more likely to be the one MC'd get a kiss from, whereas Aceline is much to innocent (pfpgt) in my own mind. Soooo.