I spent a fun sunday afternoon thanks to your game.
The music was very good, I specially like the main menu theme, it's nice and soothing.
I really like fantasy, so I enjoyed your game's world.
Also, the characters were really very likeable (and some were really handsome!) (yes, I'm shallow)
I like that they're not exactly what they seem at first glance (Nikolaos not being very trustworthy even though he's the character who initially seems more eager to help you, Kallias not being the Evil Dark Lord I had envisioned at all, etc)
My first playthrough was lots of fun because you made me backpedal on my decisions!
I met Reuben and I was like "NO WAY" because I usually don't like "playboys" at all,but as the story progressed and he showed his character more, I was like "YES WAY" and did my best to romance him.
It was hilarious to see there was an option to marry
I know that your game is more about the story than the romances, but I must critique one aspect, for future reference: Please don't "recycle" the romantic text. I noticed you used the same description no matter which character Serafina kissed ("I kissed him / her with unwavering ferocity, etc...") and it broke the immersion very much, it was like she felt the same for every character, when you had previously written very different relationships.
Please don't take my critique as an insult, as I enjoyed your game (and I'm going to read your novel, because HELL YES I want to read Arken's backstory XD)
Once more, thanks for sharing such a cool game with us.