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Congrats on the released and I like the art and this sounds really interesting.Will download as soon as I get to my com ^^

Congratulations on the release! I'll be sure to play it all, then give you my review after!

This game looks absolutely amazing. I love all the graphics, like omg I'm downloading it now!

Edit: I really love it, but I have some tips for you I think you should customize the textbox more, because it just doesnt fit the art. It also kind of distracts me from reading the text.

I just finished playing it, and it was really awesome. I even made a review of it! Lol. Hahaha. At first I was confused and everything, so I kinda sped through everything, but when I got to the part where Vienna found Vesper... oh my gosh. Hahaha. He's so beautiful. And the story is really awesome, I just loved it. Although, this left me heartbroken. Huuuuu. When will you release the next chapter? I must know what happens next!

Goodluck on the next one! Please keep making visual novels!

Congratulations on the release! I'll be sure to play it all, then give you my review after!

Thank you I'd love to read it

Edit: I really love it, but I have some tips for you I think you should customize the textbox more, because it just doesnt fit the art. It also kind of distracts me from reading the text.

Is it too dark? I wanted to keep it rather simple and non fancy, but maybe I failed there What would fit it better?

Although, this left me heartbroken. Huuuuu. When will you release the next chapter? I must know what happens next!

Goodluck on the next one! Please keep making visual novels!

I'm a terrible person, I know
I aim for February/March if my sickness won't get any worse.
And thank you so much for the review! ^_^

I wanted to keep it rather simple and non fancy, but maybe I failed there What would fit it better?

There's one textbox that is black, and its more of a window instead of it reaching the sides of the game-window (i dont know if I'm being clear enough, sorry) and also, I'm not so sure about this so correct me if I'm wrong but I think it had a border. These were the things that I noticed. Also, I liked the text but I think you should change the color of the characters names. But its all just what I noticed, someone else might like it so its your decision everything else was beautiful

That little bit in the end really shocked me. I didn't think Vesper would do such a thing! :S Also, maybe making a new topic would be okay? Since it's gonna be episodic anyways >.>

Looks really good, the sprites and CG's are amazing, will definitely play!^^

I feel this may have a very good premise to it.

Some of the artwork is done well, while some of the artwork looks unfinished (or maybe it's been enlarged which is why it looks less polished than the rest).

The writing is a little uneven (I'm guessing English isn't your first language).

But a good start, just needs to be polished up a bit.

Just finished going through this story, found it very interesting, and will be looking forward to more!

philip

Just downloaded this and I'm looking forward to it. I gotta ask, I'm going through the comic(s) at Mirage-noire.com and they are funny but in a mature manner, is the Visual Novel the same? Is it for mature audiences? Didn't see any age tags so I want to know what I'm getting myself into (will read it regardless anyway )....

I've updated the first post with the new version of the game.
Most of the graphics are new (90%) and the story is fixed. Hope you'll like it