Pyrite Heart - GxB

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Re: Pyrite Heart - GxB

#16 Post by Aisserium » Tue Dec 24, 2013 1:08 pm

It's really nice! I've waiting too long for this, and I jumped when I saw it... I'm so happy

By the way, I found something wrong in one route:
When I pick this options:
1. Go Home
2. Kick another rock at him
3. I decline
4. Wake him up and get him off

Ahri and her brother start to talk about how Kenta beat Ahri in a basketball match, and... It didn't happened, because they didn't played

I don't know where should I put this, so I left it here
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Re: Pyrite Heart - GxB

#17 Post by SilverxBlue » Tue Dec 24, 2013 1:14 pm

Aisserium wrote:It's really nice! I've waiting too long for this, and I jumped when I saw it... I'm so happy

By the way, I found something wrong in one route:
When I pick this options:
1. Go Home
2. Kick another rock at him
3. I decline
4. Wake him up and get him off

Ahri and her brother start to talk about how Kenta beat Ahri in a basketball match, and... It didn't happened, because they didn't played

I don't know where should I put this, so I left it here
Ohhh... Yep. Thanks~ I didn't notice that since I didn't made that combination of choices. ;A; Nice one. I'll ask them about it... since I think they'd have to add more lines to it. ^^ But maybe it'll be fixed when they finish version 2... and probably add in that CG gallery as well. XD
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Re: Pyrite Heart - GxB

#18 Post by Aceline » Tue Dec 24, 2013 3:46 pm

Solid art and a fun story. I'd be willing to pay for another, longer, game by this team :)

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#19 Post by Junesong » Thu Dec 26, 2013 12:57 pm

Really cute, and the CG's and art in general was absolutely breathtaking, they're both so handsome! And Ryuu in that costume... swoon!
I wish the game was longer, it seemed a bit rushed but it as a great game nonetheless!

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#20 Post by MioSegami » Thu Dec 26, 2013 8:25 pm

Definitely trying this game out!
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#21 Post by rufiangel » Fri Dec 27, 2013 1:44 am

The game looks really good, and plays nice and easy. :) Thanks for a fun and really pretty game! I think that some kind of record of the endings would be awesome, though. Or at least a CG gallery~ Otherwise it's hard to feel a sense of accomplishment? Anyway, thank you for making such a cute and fun free game!
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#22 Post by dretchlord » Fri Dec 27, 2013 2:41 am

Wow, this game it amazing!!!
The art it really spectacular :lol:

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#23 Post by Akitsuki » Fri Dec 27, 2013 5:21 am

I've been waiting for thissss!!!! I'll give some comments after I play it!
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#24 Post by Chibichann » Fri Dec 27, 2013 7:37 am

aah finally a great oteme game after such a long time......

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#25 Post by Green Glasses Girl » Fri Dec 27, 2013 4:43 pm

Wow! I loved this game! I liked Ahri more than I thought I would -the haughty side of her personality was hilarious. She's actually pretty cool.

The art is gorgeous. I will admit, I did like Kenta more (I'm a sucker for childhood friend romances). A few things:
When Ahri goes to confront Kenta about him telling Ryuu that she is a princess, the narration says they're in the library, but they're in the gymnasium. The line is:
"I don't even bother greeting him. I stride up, snap my hand back, and slap him with all my might. The noise echoes in the library."

If there is going to be a updated version in the future, will Ahri be wearing gym clothes like Kenta when he is introduced? It seemed kind of weird she was running around in her school uniform.
Also, when Ryuu blushes, the blush is gray instead of pink. It looks a bit odd.

Beautiful work! Definitely one of the best and most polished VNs I've played this year.
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Re: Pyrite Heart - GxB

#26 Post by RunicV » Sat Dec 28, 2013 12:14 pm

I'm still in the middle of playing this game, but I noticed an error? When you slap Kenta, he's in the gym and has his basketball clothes on although it says you're in the library.

I'll write a proper review after I've 100%ed it! Congratulations on the release!

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Re: Pyrite Heart - GxB

#27 Post by janrrah18 » Sat Dec 28, 2013 5:26 pm

wwwaaaahhh!!!! i'm so excited to play this!!!! :D

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#28 Post by yukoneko » Tue Dec 31, 2013 3:02 am

Omg, omg, it's released, I can't believe it. I've been waiting for this project like forever. Gonna write better comment after I played it xD

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#29 Post by thomas20 » Tue Dec 31, 2013 3:08 pm

just finished 2 chapter. so far story is looking fantastic for me.

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Re: Pyrite Heart - GxB

#30 Post by janrrah18 » Wed Jan 01, 2014 2:01 am

KYAAAAA!!! loved the story got all the endings :D
Especially Ryu with the butler get up kyaaaaaa totally fangirling over him kyaaaaa :mrgreen:

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