Orange Couch [Free Otome Game]

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Re: Orange Couch [Free Otome Game]

#16 Post by AKreiko » Thu Jan 23, 2014 3:32 pm

sonorousgem wrote:This is so impressive for your first game!! :D
I noticed you used at least some of your music (if not all) was from Kevin Macleod and I couldn't decide how I felt about that. I mean I love his music but so many people use it... I guess it was a good choice ;)
Also I noticed in the "I'm a boy" path, Yuumi's legs didn't always reach the bottom of the screen haha ;DDD
otherwise I liked it (both boy/girl perspectives, especially how some of the dialogue was in both!) and I was a little biased towards Souta b/c I played the boy path first :P
The art and the characters were all so cute XD thank you for sharing!
Thank you very much for the comment! And yes, I agree with the BGM...at first I was really stoked with the songs I used and I think they fit well, but then I started playing other games and noticed that they're frequently used, too. But it's fine. ^^
And the legs...It was too late when I noticed it...I'll do better next time...xD
I'm glad you enjoyed it and thank you for playing it! >.< I'll keep on doing my best.

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Re: Orange Couch [Free Otome Game]

#17 Post by Mystyk » Fri Feb 21, 2014 12:56 pm

Hey! I really liked this game, it's nice for a first VN, I hope you'll keep making more! :3

There was one thing that disturbed me a bit, I'm not sure if anyone has told you, but the pictures you used for the characters had some little white color in the background, it was noticable when their expressions changed (I'm sorry if I didn't explain it right), and there were also some spelling mistakes (there was probably only one though?), but I still enjoyed playing with this, and I'm waiting for your future projects I hope you'll make a lot of otome games tehhheee C: oh and the last thing, on some of the drawings the characters faces had a bit of a weird shape, so I mean the one where
the girl stands between the two guys
there Souta has a nice shaped face but Jun's looks kind of weird in my opinion.

Well anyway I enjoyed this, so make a lot more! :3

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Re: Orange Couch [Free Otome Game]

#18 Post by Chu~ » Sun Feb 23, 2014 1:17 pm

Aww, this is really cute! >//<

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Re: Orange Couch [Free Otome Game]

#19 Post by rennaaa07 » Tue Mar 04, 2014 7:51 am

This game was soooo~cute :3
I can totally relate to Yuumi and Souta's relationship~ ah.. the old like-you-but-not-risking-our-friendship feelings...
do you know what this makes me feel like? like a shoujo manga turned into a game... AND I LOVED IT (>w<) !!
it's really amazing for a first game! please keep me entertained by making more :3
Two perspectives just makes the game a whole lot better.
keep up the work!!

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Re: Orange Couch [Free Otome Game]

#20 Post by AKreiko » Tue Mar 04, 2014 10:06 am

Chu~ wrote:Aww, this is really cute! >//<
Thank you very much! ;u; Glad you liked it!

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Re: Orange Couch [Free Otome Game]

#21 Post by AKreiko » Tue Mar 04, 2014 10:08 am

rennaaa07 wrote:This game was soooo~cute :3
I can totally relate to Yuumi and Souta's relationship~ ah.. the old like-you-but-not-risking-our-friendship feelings...
do you know what this makes me feel like? like a shoujo manga turned into a game... AND I LOVED IT (>w<) !!
it's really amazing for a first game! please keep me entertained by making more :3
Two perspectives just makes the game a whole lot better.
keep up the work!!
Gosh, thank you very much! ;o; Relatable, hehe...XD
I'm glad you enjoyed this, and I'll keep on doing my best! ;u;b

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Re: Orange Couch [Free Otome Game]

#22 Post by Celestine » Tue Apr 08, 2014 2:10 am

Cute, it really is. But there weren't really that many choices.
I liked your graphic scenes. Nice colour choices. Lol Spicy Pink manga.
That was real funny. :lol:
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Re: Orange Couch [Free Otome Game]

#23 Post by AKreiko » Tue Apr 08, 2014 3:49 pm

Celestine wrote:Cute, it really is. But there weren't really that many choices.
I liked your graphic scenes. Nice colour choices. Lol Spicy Pink manga.
That was real funny. :lol:
Thank you very much for the comment! :D I'll take note of all of these, and thank you for playing! ^__^

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Re: Orange Couch [Free Otome Game]

#24 Post by cookie » Sun Aug 09, 2015 8:44 pm

oh my gosh, the story was really cute!! I LOVE IT <3 <3
good job! <3 I love the ending with Souta; it was my favorite!
have a nice day <3
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