Exile Gear Raynar is a mecha themed shoujo-ai kinetic novel. It stars Kuni, an unlucky young woman whose dream of becoming a robot pilot comes true when she's invited to the base home to the world's most powerful robot, Raynar.
The game itself is a throwback to Super Robot anime from the '70s, the protagonists are good and brightly coloured, the antagonists are evil and dark, and the heros yell out all the names of their robot's attack.
Windows version only so far, Mac version will come, I dunno? September-ish?
*Update 18-AUG-07 (less spelling and grammar mistakes, thanks chronoluminaire!)
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Hmm, it is kind of nice to see there is still Super Robot spirits among fans. And it is rather rare with an Onscripter submission.
Aside from the spelling mistakes, I find that this kinetic game is rather short. That is understandable, given that it is a NaNoRenO works, but perhaps I find that more talks are necessary among Kuni and Kyung-Soon to kinder their relation.
Oh yea, if anything, the way too fast-forwarding credits kind of annoys me.
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The robot part was nice albeit classic (but hey, it's clearly an hommage ^^) and the romantic part was cute . The humor was really cheesy at times but still got a few laughs out of me .
All in all, a nice experience ^^... It'd deserve more visual action in the robot scenes actually
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My game did crash, quite near the end- just after
One minor niggle was the way the narration was in parentheses all the time... that's just so different to how other games work that it was a bit jarring. (Also, of course, it'd be great to get the game proofread for spelling errors - I've sent you a PM.)
But still - a fun and very cute game! Thanks!
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Did it only crash the one time, or does it keep happening?
I'd be honoured to be part of the Archives~! I've added the updated link to the first post.mikey wrote:Congratulations on a finished project!
Can we mirror this at the Ren'Ai Archives? (http://www.renai.us)
Also, do you plan on releasing a fixed version (the spelling checked by chronoluminaire)? If so, we'll wait for a final updated version.
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Kuni is a very likable protagonist and the humor worked well. Some choices throughout the game would have been nice, but the story was still very entertaining without them. I had some problems with crashing, too. I think it crashed on me twice before I was able to make it to the end >_>
* When I saw the side view pic of Kuni and Kyung-Soon, my first thought was "THE HAIR!"
* The cockpit view is pretty nifty
* Kyung-Soon is so cute when she's sleeping =:3
* She's also pretty stacked for a little munchkin
Nice job! I expect to see more from you
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