Lemma Soft Forums

The three endings are a Friendship ending, Runaway ending, and Paid-off ending. The friendship ending includes all the characters and is triggered on day 15. Serving tables gives the most tips. Also be careful about the choices, the choices are locked when scrolling back!

The game was very comforting and kind of familiar. I don't mean that like it reminds me of another game just the feeling is familiar. If that makes sense >.>.

I thought the job selection sort of sim-like feature was a nice choice and the point board that showed up at the end of each day was definitely helpful. I thought there was a good variety of events for each option as well.

The characters were likeable and I think they meshed well with each other and the MC. Out of all the characters I think Adrian is my favorite. Overall it was a nice little work family and I would have loved a few more scenes with the group all together.

I enjoyed all the endings but my favorite was of course the friendship end ^^. I love friendship themed games.

The bonus scene was funny. Too bad it was just a dream and you never got to see what Leo really looked like XD.

Some critiques:
-The game makes it clear you have one month to do this. Maya decides to start job hunting and then in the next scene she says the "past two weeks have been disappointing". That makes it sound like she should only have two weeks left since two weeks have been spent looking for a job. But you actually still have a full month left once you do get a job. So you might want to make that part more clear.

-There are some errors in the scene where you go to Nichole's house. If you choose to ask what's wrong her sprite won't show up and it says there is an error with the parameters. Also during either choice Maya will sometimes appear in her work uniform instead of her normal outfit.

-A few of the transition were a little abrupt. They could have been smoothed out by having a character appear with the background instead of quickly popping up after the background was there.

-I'm not entirely sure if I'm right about this but when Maya speaks her side image appears. When she's not talking the side image isn't there. Then during the bonus scene and CG scenes the side image isn't there even when she is speaking so quotes were used with her spoken dialog instead to distinguish it from thoughts. It was good that the thoughts and spoken dialog were still different but it was a little strange to have quotes all of the sudden especially since it is only for Maya's dialog and only in a few scenes. Maybe it'd be better if there were quotes around the dialog of the other person in the scene as well. Or if quotes were used more often during the game.

-This might just be me but the music seemed pretty loud. I had it turned down in the preferences almost completely but I still needed to turn the sound on my computer down low for it to be at a good level.

-There were a few minor mistakes in grammar and such.

Banana Lou holds a special place in my heart

orz I'm no good at critique.

The bonus scene was entirely unexpected and left me laughing XD Nice job.

the month ended with me having 100/100 points with Marcus and I was $20 short of 5000. No "Hey Marcus, you know how every day you pay me $64? Please can I have $20 in advance?" (I can earn $20 from one customer) and no "911 there are gangsters harassing me and are now chasing me over $20 that I really don't even owe them!" and definitely no "Mind if I use a credit card or ATM for the last $20?" No, she just runs and the mysterious gangster leader orders his gangster minions to go get the girl who had nothing to do with her uncle's debt!