[Windows][NanoReno'14] Colors ~ Aoi's Utopia ~ [Friendship]

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[Windows][NanoReno'14] Colors ~ Aoi's Utopia ~ [Friendship]

#1 Post by ppppantsu » Sat Mar 29, 2014 11:57 pm

ORIGINAL WIP: NANORENO THREAD

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Colors ~ Aoi's Utopia ~

UPDATE:
- Uploaded new files, omg, I'm sorry if some of you checked the links and they didn't work. QvQ /
- If some of you played the first set of files, I'm sorry, omg, there were things that were off and not polished. TTvTT

such mistake. <///3


PLOT

WELCOME to Aoi's space, world, utopia in which he called "Colors" despite being a colorless or plain white place.
But since he created this world, he can name and modify it to whatever comes in his mind.

He believes he is alone in his own world and no one can enter it other than Aoi himself,
but one day there appeared an energetic boy covered in bandages much to Aoi's astonishment.
But there's more to it.
The boy knows Aoi, but Aoi doesn't know him.
However, the boy just introduced himself as Aoi's "friend".

Yet, Aoi claims he has no friends. AT ALL.

His "peaceful" life suddenly disturbed by an unknown boy.

Who is this boy?
How does he know and relate to Aoi?
More importantly, how did he enter Aoi's utopia?


DOWNLOAD LINKS ARE HERE

Available only for WINDOWS.
Apparently it would be useless to upload a MAC version since I think it doesn't work after all.
I've said this before that I don't have MAC so I can't check the app itself. I am sorry.
Dropbox / Mediafire hosted.

This isn't much but please leave feedback after playing. TTvTT
Although I had fun writing this one, I admit it's a bit rushed to meet my deadline today.
Two of the endings were altered, since I wasn't able to draw the characters' 2nd sprites versions.


CHARACTERS

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#2 Post by Armee » Sat Mar 29, 2014 11:59 pm

Oh hey :D Congratulation on the release :D I see you make it on time :P
Will definitely try and give you some feedbacks!

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#3 Post by ppppantsu » Sun Mar 30, 2014 12:05 am

Armee wrote:Oh hey :D Congratulation on the release :D I see you make it on time :P
Will definitely try and give you some feedbacks!


Thank you very much~! TTvTT~
I hope you'd enjoy it bricked even though this one's a lot different from my first original. QvQ
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#4 Post by Whimsical Conductor » Sun Mar 30, 2014 12:44 am

Going to play this. The art is so cute!

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#5 Post by Armee » Sun Mar 30, 2014 12:51 am

Wow, I finished this in one sit hehe
I admit I like Pastel the most and Aoi's personality is so fun. I like the game a lot.
One of the neutral ending gave me a bit of sadness, especially after unlocking the true ending first.
Cute but a bit desperate sometimes ;_; Thank you for making this game

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#6 Post by Laniessa » Sun Mar 30, 2014 1:33 am

So cute...!

First off, the art style was adorable! Like, wow! So cute! And bright!
I really liked the style of the b&w bgs =w=

For, um, feedback, there were quite a lot of typos, so I reckon if you want to polish it, you just give it a thorough read-over. The story was nice and simple, although I kept getting the neutral endings at first ._. i must be antisocial

Iro was okay; he was really fluffy and cute, which is a Very Good point for me, but he did sound a bit annoying at times. Which, I guess, is his character, so I'm not criticizing your writing. Pastel was really good! Uwaaahh so fluffy.

A couple of things that I noted; the fade-ins and stuff, I'm not sure; the timing made it a bit frustrating, since it took a while for me to get to the next piece of text, but I'm worried that I might miss something. (I usually didn't, so I didn't really see the point.)

I think that's all I really have to say - I'll admit it doesn't have much emotional impact on me, but then again, it is pretty short. Really nice job, and congratulations on getting it done!

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#7 Post by Kagura » Sun Mar 30, 2014 1:54 am

EMG ITS PPPPPPPAAAAAAANTSUUUUUUUUUU <3
And yaaay~! Congrats on the release > u <
I'll be playing this huehueheuheu

I luv your games ' u ' or w/e we call eet huehue xDD
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#8 Post by mugenjohncel » Sun Mar 30, 2014 1:56 am

Congratulations on finishing on time (and I'm beginning to worry that only I and Donmai will get to finish on time) :mrgreen:

I'll wait until you finished uploading the files... looking forward to it :)

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#9 Post by Sleipnir56 » Sun Mar 30, 2014 2:12 am

Cool that got your game out in time. I wish I could play. I have a mac so I can't. Still glad you got it. Just one question, when does NanoReno officially end, because on your site it says the 30th

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#10 Post by ppppantsu » Sun Mar 30, 2014 3:29 am

Sleipnir56 wrote:Cool that got your game out in time. I wish I could play. I have a mac so I can't. Still glad you got it. Just one question, when does NanoReno officially end, because on your site it says the 30th

OMG I'm sorry, it's 31st O believe. Q v Q
I keep on forgetting there's march 31 too. Q v Q
I'd love to build the files for Mac but the last game I released some says the Mac app doesn't work. QmQ


mugenjohncel wrote:Congratulations on finishing on time (and I'm beginning to worry that only I and Donmai will get to finish on time) :mrgreen:

I'll wait until you finished uploading the files... looking forward to it :)

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Hi Uncle Mugen.
Don't mind me speaking in Tagalog though since I wanna be more polite. :"D
Salamat sa paghihintay. Tapos ko na po i-upload yung files. Medyo namadali ko nga lang to kasi gusto ko talagang umabot sa deadline. QvQ


Kagura wrote:EMG ITS PPPPPPPAAAAAAANTSUUUUUUUUUU <3
And yaaay~! Congrats on the release > u <
I'll be playing this huehueheuheu


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Thank you for
Thank you for loving them. QAQ <3


Armee wrote:Wow, I finished this in one sit hehe
I admit I like Pastel the most and Aoi's personality is so fun. I like the game a lot.
One of the neutral ending gave me a bit of sadness, especially after unlocking the true ending first.
Cute but a bit desperate sometimes ;_; Thank you for making this game

Thank you for playing too. QAQ
I told you it's really short. TTvTT


Whimsical Conductor wrote:Going to play this. The art is so cute!

Thank you a bunch. QVQ

Laniessa wrote:So cute...!

I'm sorry for many typos. TTvTT~
I'll really get a proofreader next time, since finally it's summer, no one's busy with school anymore.

Thank you for the feedback, QVQ. )/
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#11 Post by Sleipnir56 » Sun Mar 30, 2014 3:57 am

Okay thanks and that's okay :mrgreen:
And it's alright. If it's doesn't work, that's not your fault. Just sucks that I can play. Still, I wish you luck with your games :)

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#12 Post by Asceai » Sun Mar 30, 2014 4:04 am

Sleipnir56 wrote:Okay thanks and that's okay :mrgreen:
And it's alright. If it's doesn't work, that's not your fault. Just sucks that I can play. Still, I wish you luck with your games :)


Tip: Download the game, extract it (including the enclosing folder) into your renpy project directory and run it though the launcher.

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#13 Post by Hazel-Bun » Sun Mar 30, 2014 8:07 am

Awesome ^^ Was watching this from the start! Downloading now.
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#14 Post by Sleipnir56 » Sun Mar 30, 2014 2:21 pm

Asceai wrote:
Sleipnir56 wrote:Okay thanks and that's okay :mrgreen:
And it's alright. If it's doesn't work, that's not your fault. Just sucks that I can play. Still, I wish you luck with your games :)


Tip: Download the game, extract it (including the enclosing folder) into your renpy project directory and run it though the launcher.



Thank you so much. It worked :D . Thanks again

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#15 Post by Donmai » Sun Mar 30, 2014 5:25 pm

Congrats on your release :D .
After releasing a NaNo work we will always hear things like "there are typos" or "a pity it's too short", but that's life. What's more important is to have that damn thing done in time. We can always release a new version after some time. :)
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