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[Windows][NanoReno'14] Colors ~ Aoi's Utopia ~ [Friendship]

Posted: Sat Mar 29, 2014 11:57 pm
by ppppantsu
ORIGINAL WIP: NANORENO THREAD

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Colors ~ Aoi's Utopia ~

UPDATE:
- Uploaded new files, omg, I'm sorry if some of you checked the links and they didn't work. QvQ /
- If some of you played the first set of files, I'm sorry, omg, there were things that were off and not polished. TTvTT

such mistake. <///3


PLOT

WELCOME to Aoi's space, world, utopia in which he called "Colors" despite being a colorless or plain white place.
But since he created this world, he can name and modify it to whatever comes in his mind.

He believes he is alone in his own world and no one can enter it other than Aoi himself,
but one day there appeared an energetic boy covered in bandages much to Aoi's astonishment.
But there's more to it.
The boy knows Aoi, but Aoi doesn't know him.
However, the boy just introduced himself as Aoi's "friend".

Yet, Aoi claims he has no friends. AT ALL.

His "peaceful" life suddenly disturbed by an unknown boy.

Who is this boy?
How does he know and relate to Aoi?
More importantly, how did he enter Aoi's utopia?


DOWNLOAD LINKS ARE HERE

Available only for WINDOWS.
Apparently it would be useless to upload a MAC version since I think it doesn't work after all.
I've said this before that I don't have MAC so I can't check the app itself. I am sorry.
Dropbox / Mediafire hosted.
This isn't much but please leave feedback after playing. TTvTT
Although I had fun writing this one, I admit it's a bit rushed to meet my deadline today.
Two of the endings were altered, since I wasn't able to draw the characters' 2nd sprites versions.
CHARACTERS

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Re: [Windows][NanoReno'14] Colors ~ Aoi's Utopia ~ [Friendsh

Posted: Sat Mar 29, 2014 11:59 pm
by Armee
Oh hey :D Congratulation on the release :D I see you make it on time :P
Will definitely try and give you some feedbacks!

Re: [Windows][NanoReno'14] Colors ~ Aoi's Utopia ~ [Friendsh

Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2014 12:05 am
by ppppantsu
Armee wrote:Oh hey :D Congratulation on the release :D I see you make it on time :P
Will definitely try and give you some feedbacks!
Thank you very much~! TTvTT~
I hope you'd enjoy it bricked even though this one's a lot different from my first original. QvQ

Re: [Windows][NanoReno'14] Colors ~ Aoi's Utopia ~ [Friendsh

Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2014 12:44 am
by Whimsical Conductor
Going to play this. The art is so cute!

Re: [Windows][NanoReno'14] Colors ~ Aoi's Utopia ~ [Friendsh

Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2014 12:51 am
by Armee
Wow, I finished this in one sit hehe
I admit I like Pastel the most and Aoi's personality is so fun. I like the game a lot.
One of the neutral ending gave me a bit of sadness, especially after unlocking the true ending first.
Cute but a bit desperate sometimes ;_; Thank you for making this game

Re: [Windows][NanoReno'14] Colors ~ Aoi's Utopia ~ [Friendsh

Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2014 1:33 am
by Laniessa
So cute...!

First off, the art style was adorable! Like, wow! So cute! And bright!
I really liked the style of the b&w bgs =w=

For, um, feedback, there were quite a lot of typos, so I reckon if you want to polish it, you just give it a thorough read-over. The story was nice and simple, although I kept getting the neutral endings at first ._. i must be antisocial

Iro was okay; he was really fluffy and cute, which is a Very Good point for me, but he did sound a bit annoying at times. Which, I guess, is his character, so I'm not criticizing your writing. Pastel was really good! Uwaaahh so fluffy.

A couple of things that I noted; the fade-ins and stuff, I'm not sure; the timing made it a bit frustrating, since it took a while for me to get to the next piece of text, but I'm worried that I might miss something. (I usually didn't, so I didn't really see the point.)

I think that's all I really have to say - I'll admit it doesn't have much emotional impact on me, but then again, it is pretty short. Really nice job, and congratulations on getting it done!

Re: [Windows][NanoReno'14] Colors ~ Aoi's Utopia ~ [Friendsh

Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2014 1:54 am
by Kagura
EMG ITS PPPPPPPAAAAAAANTSUUUUUUUUUU <3
And yaaay~! Congrats on the release > u <
I'll be playing this huehueheuheu

I luv your games ' u ' or w/e we call eet huehue xDD

Re: [Windows][NanoReno'14] Colors ~ Aoi's Utopia ~ [Friendsh

Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2014 1:56 am
by mugenjohncel
Congratulations on finishing on time (and I'm beginning to worry that only I and Donmai will get to finish on time) :mrgreen:

I'll wait until you finished uploading the files... looking forward to it :)

"POOF" (Disappears)

Re: [Windows][NanoReno'14] Colors ~ Aoi's Utopia ~ [Friendsh

Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2014 2:12 am
by Sleipnir56
Cool that got your game out in time. I wish I could play. I have a mac so I can't. Still glad you got it. Just one question, when does NanoReno officially end, because on your site it says the 30th

Re: [Windows][NanoReno'14] Colors ~ Aoi's Utopia ~ [Friendsh

Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2014 3:29 am
by ppppantsu
Sleipnir56 wrote:Cool that got your game out in time. I wish I could play. I have a mac so I can't. Still glad you got it. Just one question, when does NanoReno officially end, because on your site it says the 30th
OMG I'm sorry, it's 31st O believe. Q v Q
I keep on forgetting there's march 31 too. Q v Q
I'd love to build the files for Mac but the last game I released some says the Mac app doesn't work. QmQ

mugenjohncel wrote:Congratulations on finishing on time (and I'm beginning to worry that only I and Donmai will get to finish on time) :mrgreen:

I'll wait until you finished uploading the files... looking forward to it :)

"POOF" (Disappears)
Hi Uncle Mugen.
Don't mind me speaking in Tagalog though since I wanna be more polite. :"D
Salamat sa paghihintay. Tapos ko na po i-upload yung files. Medyo namadali ko nga lang to kasi gusto ko talagang umabot sa deadline. QvQ

Kagura wrote:EMG ITS PPPPPPPAAAAAAANTSUUUUUUUUUU <3
And yaaay~! Congrats on the release > u <
I'll be playing this huehueheuheu


I luv your games ' u ' or w/e we call eet huehue xDD
Thank you for
Thank you for loving them. QAQ <3

Armee wrote:Wow, I finished this in one sit hehe
I admit I like Pastel the most and Aoi's personality is so fun. I like the game a lot.
One of the neutral ending gave me a bit of sadness, especially after unlocking the true ending first.
Cute but a bit desperate sometimes ;_; Thank you for making this game
Thank you for playing too. QAQ
I told you it's really short. TTvTT

Whimsical Conductor wrote:Going to play this. The art is so cute!
Thank you a bunch. QVQ
Laniessa wrote:So cute...!
I'm sorry for many typos. TTvTT~
I'll really get a proofreader next time, since finally it's summer, no one's busy with school anymore.

Thank you for the feedback, QVQ. )/

Re: [Windows][NanoReno'14] Colors ~ Aoi's Utopia ~ [Friendsh

Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2014 3:57 am
by Sleipnir56
Okay thanks and that's okay :mrgreen:
And it's alright. If it's doesn't work, that's not your fault. Just sucks that I can play. Still, I wish you luck with your games :)

Re: [Windows][NanoReno'14] Colors ~ Aoi's Utopia ~ [Friendsh

Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2014 4:04 am
by Asceai
Sleipnir56 wrote:Okay thanks and that's okay :mrgreen:
And it's alright. If it's doesn't work, that's not your fault. Just sucks that I can play. Still, I wish you luck with your games :)
Tip: Download the game, extract it (including the enclosing folder) into your renpy project directory and run it though the launcher.

Re: [Windows][NanoReno'14] Colors ~ Aoi's Utopia ~ [Friendsh

Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2014 8:07 am
by Hazel-Bun
Awesome ^^ Was watching this from the start! Downloading now.

Re: [Windows][NanoReno'14] Colors ~ Aoi's Utopia ~ [Friendsh

Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2014 2:21 pm
by Sleipnir56
Asceai wrote:
Sleipnir56 wrote:Okay thanks and that's okay :mrgreen:
And it's alright. If it's doesn't work, that's not your fault. Just sucks that I can play. Still, I wish you luck with your games :)
Tip: Download the game, extract it (including the enclosing folder) into your renpy project directory and run it though the launcher.

Thank you so much. It worked :D . Thanks again

Re: [Windows][NanoReno'14] Colors ~ Aoi's Utopia ~ [Friendsh

Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2014 5:25 pm
by Donmai
Congrats on your release :D .
After releasing a NaNo work we will always hear things like "there are typos" or "a pity it's too short", but that's life. What's more important is to have that damn thing done in time. We can always release a new version after some time. :)