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PostPosted: Thu Oct 16, 2014 12:47 pm 
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An impromptu KN that I decided to make today. Writing took me 2+ hours, coding took me another 3+ hours. Managed to finish it under one day.
I apologize in advance if there is any grammatical errors or if I left out something. I checked but I didn't notice any errors - then again i'm half asleep (://shot)
I know it's far from perfect, but I hope that you guys will still give it a try. :)
2000+ words
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A short story about growing up.
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Mac: https://www.mediafire.com/?i1d0e1qef2qvr1k
Win: https://www.mediafire.com/?o9swgs2es2ogj1v
Linux: http://www.mediafire.com/download/22626 ... ux.tar.bz2
(P.S: If for some reason the game/link doesn't work please tell me. I can't test for all the platforms so yeah :/ Sorry.)
Thanks for reading and hope you enjoyed it!
[Credits to feainne-stock(http://feainne-stock.deviantart.com) for the background photos]


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PostPosted: Thu Oct 16, 2014 1:53 pm 
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What's it about?

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PostPosted: Thu Oct 16, 2014 8:41 pm 
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A short story about growing up
told from the perspective of a girl's imaginary friend.
. I really don't know how else to sum it up :/
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 17, 2014 7:30 am 
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That sounds good! I might download it later. :)

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Thank's so much! Hope you enjoy it :)

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 20, 2014 3:37 pm 
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It's a nice little story, there were a few grammatical errors but other than that it was a good story. One other thing is that the girl seemed the same in terms of speech (there were a lot of "uwaaah" and stuff like that), it's fine, but can make her seems annoying, and also doesn't help show the change in age and maturity.

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@ColaCat:
Aww thanks so much for trying! Glad you liked it haha. I'll keep that in mind :D Thanks!

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 21, 2014 1:06 pm 
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No problem. It was quite well written, hope you make some more stuff soon. :)

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Played your game! Thank you for using my UI, that means a lot to me. :)


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Thanks so much for letting me use it!!! :DD

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