A Forgotten Memory[Short KN]
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- AsHLeX
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A Forgotten Memory[Short KN]
An impromptu KN that I decided to make today. Writing took me 2+ hours, coding took me another 3+ hours. Managed to finish it under one day.
I apologize in advance if there is any grammatical errors or if I left out something. I checked but I didn't notice any errors - then again i'm half asleep (://shot)
I know it's far from perfect, but I hope that you guys will still give it a try.
2000+ words
Story:
A short story about growing up.
DL link:
Mac: https://www.mediafire.com/?i1d0e1qef2qvr1k
Win: https://www.mediafire.com/?o9swgs2es2ogj1v
Linux: http://www.mediafire.com/download/22626 ... ux.tar.bz2
(P.S: If for some reason the game/link doesn't work please tell me. I can't test for all the platforms so yeah :/ Sorry.)
Thanks for reading and hope you enjoyed it!
[Credits to feainne-stock(http://feainne-stock.deviantart.com) for the background photos]
I apologize in advance if there is any grammatical errors or if I left out something. I checked but I didn't notice any errors - then again i'm half asleep (://shot)
I know it's far from perfect, but I hope that you guys will still give it a try.
2000+ words
Story:
A short story about growing up.
DL link:
Mac: https://www.mediafire.com/?i1d0e1qef2qvr1k
Win: https://www.mediafire.com/?o9swgs2es2ogj1v
Linux: http://www.mediafire.com/download/22626 ... ux.tar.bz2
(P.S: If for some reason the game/link doesn't work please tell me. I can't test for all the platforms so yeah :/ Sorry.)
Thanks for reading and hope you enjoyed it!
[Credits to feainne-stock(http://feainne-stock.deviantart.com) for the background photos]
Last edited by AsHLeX on Thu Oct 16, 2014 9:04 pm, edited 1 time in total.
- AsHLeX
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Re: A Forgotten Memory[Short KN]
A short story about growing up
Sorry
told from the perspective of a girl's imaginary friend.
. I really don't know how else to sum it up :/ Sorry
Re: A Forgotten Memory[Short KN]
It's a nice little story, there were a few grammatical errors but other than that it was a good story. One other thing is that the girl seemed the same in terms of speech (there were a lot of "uwaaah" and stuff like that), it's fine, but can make her seems annoying, and also doesn't help show the change in age and maturity.
- AsHLeX
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Re: A Forgotten Memory[Short KN]
@ColaCat:
Aww thanks so much for trying! Glad you liked it haha. I'll keep that in mind Thanks!
Aww thanks so much for trying! Glad you liked it haha. I'll keep that in mind Thanks!
Re: A Forgotten Memory[Short KN]
No problem. It was quite well written, hope you make some more stuff soon.
Re: A Forgotten Memory[Short KN]
Played your game! Thank you for using my UI, that means a lot to me.
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Re: A Forgotten Memory[Short KN]
@Giovedi:
Thanks so much for letting me use it!!! D
Thanks so much for letting me use it!!! D
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