One Leaf Clover [GxB] [Slice of Life] [NaNo2014]

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Re: One Leaf Clover [GxB] [Slice of Life] [NaNo2014]

#16 Post by xxstrangesoulxx » Mon Apr 14, 2014 12:30 pm

Cute VN. I love that there is voice acting. Sorry but I really have no helpful feedback on the voice acting, except to say it was done pretty well.

I didn't like the main character that much...well at least towards the beginning. I felt she was a bit too harsh with Taru and I really like Taru. He's so cute. :3 The rest of the characters were alright. Anyway, I liked the story well and it's pretty good NaNo game. I look forward to playing more voiced games from you. :)

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Re: One Leaf Clover [GxB] [Slice of Life] [NaNo2014]

#17 Post by rmt_2011 » Sun Apr 20, 2014 8:57 pm

Nice. I really liked the addition of the voice acting - it really shows that you put a little bit extra into the game to make it more special. Everything was great although I wish there were more endings...

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Re: One Leaf Clover [GxB] [Slice of Life] [NaNo2014]

#18 Post by Ran08 » Sat May 03, 2014 1:22 am

Like xxstrangesoulxx, I didn't like the main character in the beginning too. And not just not much, haha, I didn't like her at all! :)) As in full on dislike. Hahahaha. However, this VN is still so adorable, especially the good ending. Hahaha. And the voice acting was amazing~ I've got so much more to say, hahaha, so... full thoughts here. :)

Congratulations on your release! :) I hope to hear more from you! Hahaha.

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#19 Post by suzuaki » Sat May 03, 2014 3:52 am

This is such a lovely and cute game!

As someone who played vns regularly, I think the voices makes a very nice addition for the plot. I love it.
The voice types are wonderful, and japanese-like(especially rimu-- her voice is really cute!)

The characters are really unique and charming in their own way, so good job on that *-*
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#20 Post by TakeOverWorld » Mon May 05, 2014 1:10 pm

This was sweet, and I liked the vioces, except Rimu's, for similar reasons to nctolu.
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I was kinda thrown by the plane... crash? It seemed really sudden, and then no one seemed too bothered by the fact the plane had just malfuntioned when they were on it, not even the Uncle who was flying it. I thought that was really jarring.

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#21 Post by Allegra Hughes » Tue May 13, 2014 10:57 am

Ran08 wrote:so... full thoughts here. :)
Omg thank you so much for your review :D

and thank you to everyone else who has given feedback about voice acting and the game!

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#22 Post by Lesleigh63 » Mon Sep 15, 2014 10:23 pm

I liked the voice acting - I thought it added to the game. The writing was easy to read - no jarring sentences although the plots a little simple, but this is a nano entry - you don't have months and months to think up an indepth plot and write it. Interesting to see what you may come up with next if you continue as a team.
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#23 Post by Ferdokki » Sun Sep 28, 2014 9:32 pm

Lolol, I recognize some of the characters from the "Don't Take it Personally Babe..." game. ;)

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#24 Post by brightstar2011 » Fri Oct 10, 2014 4:40 am

The voice acting was pretty top noch! And I really liked the art! Congratulations on finishing this :D

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#25 Post by elioraa » Tue Jun 14, 2016 2:38 pm

Okay but these characters are Eerily similar to the ones in "Don't take it personally babe, It just ain't your story." I don't know if that game producer copied your characters or the other way around, but it's too uncanny to just ignore. Here are links to some of the characters
Rimu Asakura or Kendal Flowers,
http://images.jayisgames.com/dora_dtipb_5.jpg

Souka Kumo or Isabella,
https://i.ytimg.com/vi/bBIBLx2HOoA/mqdefault.jpg
Just wanted to Let you know that (at least) these characters are pretty similar..

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Re: One Leaf Clover [GxB] [Slice of Life] [NaNo2014]

#26 Post by infel » Tue Jun 14, 2016 5:27 pm

elioraa wrote:Okay but these characters are Eerily similar to the ones in "Don't take it personally babe, It just ain't your story." I don't know if that game producer copied your characters or the other way around, but it's too uncanny to just ignore. Here are links to some of the characters
Rimu Asakura or Kendal Flowers,
http://images.jayisgames.com/dora_dtipb_5.jpg

Souka Kumo or Isabella,
https://i.ytimg.com/vi/bBIBLx2HOoA/mqdefault.jpg
Just wanted to Let you know that (at least) these characters are pretty similar..

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