Uwah~ A D. Gray Man game and it's Lavi?! (Baka Usagi?!
) You pulled me out of the shadows to make me make a comment!
First of all: CONGRATULATIONS! In two days?! You and Fenrir are a hero~ KYA~ Is that official art as the menu page I see?? >3?
<3 Here is my love for you~ It's not dumb to do a D. Gray Man fan uhh story! Okay I'm sorry I'm fangirling hehe.
Okay okay, on to the more serious stuff.
Order of endings I got:
Eaten By Lavi, Food Poisoning, Real Bad End, Neutral Ending, Best End
Anything else I'm missing?
Oh... wait sorry that's it right?
First of all:
I thought the plot was super cute! At the same time not believable ;u; sorry. I know it's made in two days which really limits the story but you got it done!
I'm sorry if I sound a bit mean in the next paragraph about Lavi
Okay so why I don't find it believable? I guess it's because of the way "Lavi" is admittedly I don't think the portrayal of him is realistic. ;u;
I might not be the best position to say that it was unrealistic since I didn't get to the part where Allen left
It felt like the game was more of giant spoiler for the series via summary reading... Well that's only because I love the series a lot. I'm sorry don't hate me. >.< I thought Lavi would've been more secretive about everything. More like flirty, somewhat helpful, but very closed lipped (until the player reaches the Best End, then he more or less shares stuff!) And, well some other technical aspect that bugged me about the "canon" references of the story... I'm sorry if I'm too picky. Love makes me picky (and maybe an inaccurate memory...) I'm sorry. D:
However, I genuinely thought the story was cute (beginning) and realistic with the plot (in the bad, neutral, and best end). (even if I didn't really like how Lavi was portrayed).
Well onto the endings:
The first end I got (eaten by Lavi) that you said gave me this reaction:
xD the second ending was the same as well, I found it funny. (Does that make me an evil girl?
The neutral end was neutral. ('Nuff said)
The real bad end and good end was actually pretty realistic because the situation that happens (I'm not spoiling it!) isn't portrayed at all in the manga (up to what I've read anyway) and it is a definite possibility.
All in all: Cheap ending? No you've got it wrong! It's amusing!
I hope that this was of some help (to someone)? And... LAVI IS SO CUTEEEEEEEEEE!!!
Please make more~ Uh for the art maybe I can help? I'm not a really good artist but I'm sure I can try? If you want?