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Re: pretty [Paranormal] [Kinetic] [NaNo 2014]
Posted: Fri Apr 25, 2014 7:32 pm
by noeinan
Oh man, those sprites are ADORABLE. I will download and play this game soon.
Re: pretty [Paranormal] [Kinetic] [NaNo 2014]
Posted: Sat Apr 26, 2014 9:34 pm
by rmt_2011
That was pretty good. I really liked the use of the sound effects, music, lighting and the writing during the suspense scenes. They were done well.
I'm sure many could have been able to guess the first plot twist. I could guess the second one during the conversation at lunch since I'm sure you wouldn't have put it there for no reason.
Overall - nice work
(well...of course the ending wasn't exactly
nice but you get what I mean
Re: pretty [Paranormal] [Kinetic] [NaNo 2014]
Posted: Sat May 10, 2014 4:10 pm
by plaster
i loved it! =D
also i'm a loser and i read these aloud to myself sometimes and do the voices
here was the result of that
kirei
tomo
Re: pretty [Paranormal] [Kinetic] [NaNo 2014]
Posted: Sun May 11, 2014 6:55 am
by LovetteSakura
Looks kawaii ^^
Re: pretty [Paranormal] [Kinetic] [NaNo 2014]
Posted: Sun May 11, 2014 11:32 am
by plaster
It is kawaii.
And kowai.
Seriously though those sprites are cute as hell.
I also like that the icon seems to be a play on the vndb favicon. >w<
Re: pretty [Paranormal] [Kinetic] [NaNo 2014]
Posted: Tue May 13, 2014 3:06 pm
by Fenrir34
T-that was a really sad game
. I mean it was really good, but the ending was depressing.
I feel so sorry for Tomo. I wish the main listened to her. I take it she was a 'good' vampire and just wanted a friend. Hated Kirie. She was such a (insert curse word). But I do like her last line to Akira about if she was pretty enough.
Anyway, here's was I really liked about the game
~Music was creepy yet light which is good for the atmosphere of the game.
~I loved Tomo a lot and even liked Kirei for the first half
~Art was really well done, especially the backgrounds.
~The story was well written as well, and I liked how you didn't add sparkly vampires
What I didn't like so much
Though Kirei was a total jerk I didn't dislike her. I think what she did fits in with the story well. The main character is what I didn't like much. From the beginning I knew they weren't someone I would want as a friend. He/She only really spend time with Kirei because she was popular and pretty. Still, I don't think
she deserved that ending, though the ending was still cool with Tomo.
Also, I kind of was able to guess the story. But that isn't a bad thing since I really did like it.
So, thanks for a fun game. I'll be looking forward to your others
Re: pretty [Paranormal] [Kinetic] [NaNo 2014]
Posted: Sun May 18, 2014 4:31 pm
by SilverSnow
Finished the game a few days before! I can't help but say you did a job well done! The sprites were so cute *°* I didn't expect that ending though, it left me with questions. Is there going to be a sequel? ;D
Again, the game was "pretty" nice ^-^ Looking forward for more of your works.
Re: pretty [Paranormal] [Kinetic] [NaNo 2014]
Posted: Mon Jun 02, 2014 7:37 am
by InvertMouse
The sprites look cute, and that last screenshot with the phone looks like there'll be some potential scares. Downloading now
!
Re: pretty [Paranormal] [Kinetic] [NaNo 2014]
Posted: Mon Jun 02, 2014 10:32 am
by The Chaos Entity
That was one of the best Visual/Kinetic Novels I've ever read, and I've read quite a few.
The art was absolutely amazing! If there is an update, I think some more CGs would be excellent!
The music was really, really fitting as well, and lent a suitably spooky air to everything.
I think it would be amazing if there was a story branch, or two as well, but, I still think it's one of the best I've read, and it's only about an hour long!
I actually made an account purely to voice how great I think this is.
I'd just like to say thank you for making it!