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Ending Guide: (Possible Spoilers)

I played Sacred Sand. I loved that game. Very cute Yaoi. So, when I saw you were making this I knew I had to play it. It looks good. Downloading it now. Gonna tell you what I think later. Thanks for the game ^_^

Thank you for the game, well done.

Best Regards
Jim

Are you okay with people mirroring the download? I'd rather not have to recommend people get things from dodgy fileshare sites and I'm pretty sure Spiky would be willing to put it up.

(Also, /u/ says your game is cute. Since they tend not to post here, I thought I'd mention.)

It looks cute I downloaded it and will play it ^^

@Sleipnir56: Thanks so much! It's not nearly as complicated as Sacred Sand, but I hope you still manage to enjoy it.

@JimG: Thank you! I hope to make even better ones in the future.

@papillon: I am 100% completely okay with that. I also understand not wanting to direct them to fileshare sites. They are all really dodgy. I'm just stuck with free stuff since I'm not willing to shell out the cash. Anyway, to reiterate, I'm totally fine with that and I'm glad /u/ enjoyed it.

@LovetteSakura: Thanks! I hope you enjoy it!

Okay, so I just finished the game.

What i liked about it

-Mira was hilarious. I kind of know what it feels like to not be the best at something. Also, I really liked Odette's character to. She was a jerk, but also had kindness to her as well.

-Like with Sacred Sand, I loved the art to this game. It's cute and mature looking at the same time (Can those go together actually?)"

-The story was simple, yet very interested. My favorite part was -The game was also really funny. I laughed a good couple of times as I played it. Best part was the What I disliked

-I didn't dislike anything in this game. The only thing I wish was that we got to know Sybelle a bit more because i found her really interested. Her was good, but I felt like I wanted to see more of her. Also, I wish there was a romantic ending with her to. But her ending were okay.


Besides that I really did enjoy this game. It was nice to play a GXG game since they're aren't to many. Hope you make another one or another yaoi game. Once again, job well done. Keep up the good work and thanks for making this fun game

Interesting game. I just wished it could be a bit longer.

It was a nice, relaxing gameplay, with a bit of laughs here and there.
The whole idea and plot was nice, interesting and it kept player curious what will happen next.

Although, at some points the person who were talking wasn't the one who was displayed (which made me confused few times).

This is a cute game, I really enjoyed it. I liked the mermaid.

A nitpick, it's a GUI thing... The bold black names were a little hard to read and the dialogue box needs top padding. I think a thin white outline around the names would help.

Thanks for sharing.

Just finished playing through all endings! Really enjoyed the game, I especially liked Mira and Odette's constant bickering. And the romantic endings are just d'aawwwww :3

I do agree with saguaro about the character names. But really, this game is already lovely as it is. Thanks for making it and I hope you continue making more!

Yes I finished it and I really liked it if was really funny and I liked the romance Thank you for the great game.

I played through all of the endings. I think it's a cute, heart-warming story. I find a couple of misspellings here and there, but nothing too bad. I like your art by the way, it's really cute. :3

Very cute game full of charm~ Love the characters a lot.

SilverHyena wrote: @papillon: I am 100% completely okay with that. I also understand not wanting to direct them to fileshare sites. They are all really dodgy. I'm just stuck with free stuff since I'm not willing to shell out the cash. Anyway, to reiterate, I'm totally fine with that and I'm glad /u/ enjoyed it.

I've put a mirror up at http://spikycaterpillar.com/mira's_magical_mishap/ (which reminds me, I really need to redesign my site some decade).

I enjoyed playing it; do you want any typo patrol notes?

@Sleipnir56: Thanks so much for taking the time to play it and give me some feedback! I agree with you wholeheartedly on the Sybelle thing. I wanted to give her more romantic endings, but considering the little time you did spend with her I thought it would be weird to make them full on romantic. She suffered from being a later addition to the game since the original plan was to make Odette the only character you actually met with. You'll be happy to know that I plan on including at least one gay option in all my games for that very reason! I'll probably do another bl one next. I'm thinking about trying to make an 18+ adult game, but I still haven't made up my mind on that.

@Angie: Haha, I actually planned to make it shorter originally. Still, from a player stand point longer is generally better so I totally get it. And you've made a good point about the characters speaking when another sprite was displayed. I figured I wouldn't switch them out if they only made one or two comments during the particular conversation, but I can see it being confusing-- especially since others have pointed out that the names are kind of hard to read. I'll keep that in mind for my next game. Thank you for playing it!

@Saguro: You're right. If I make an updated version I'll change the color or figure out how to do some kind of outline (programming is not my expertise ). The first way is definitely an easy solution to that. Thanks for giving it a shot.

@crestforge: Haha, I like that about them too. I enjoy relationships where two people start off as enemies/rivals. I'll fix the name thing if I do an updated version. Thank you for playing it!

@LovetteSakura: Thank you so much for playing it! Thanks also for taking the time to do a review for it!

@CrimsonMoon: Haha, yeah. I really should put it through a spell checker. I always think I'm better at catching my typos than I actually am. Anyway, thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

@Uncomplicated: Thank you! I really like my characters so it's good to know other people appreciate them too! It makes me feel good about my writing.

@Spiky Caterpillar: Thank you so much for doing that! It definitely looks more friendly than the sites I put it up on. I'll go put the link in the first place after I'm done with this comment. Anyway, if you feel like doing a typo patrol go for it! If I do an updated version I'll be sure to fix them. I'm pretty slow/lazy though so only do it if you want to.