A Harder Battle [KN][Short][Free][Web Version Available]

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A Harder Battle [KN][Short][Free][Web Version Available]

#1 Post by Broodelin » Sat May 24, 2014 12:38 am

A Harder Battle
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Created from scratch in twelve hours for friends in need.
A quick, kinetic novel based on true events showing a moment of kindness that begins a life.

'Sophie' sprite courtesy of konett
Backgrounds courtesy of MaoSpace
Music courtesy of Gio
Estimated length: 3 ~ 5 minutes
Last edited by Broodelin on Sun May 25, 2014 1:23 am, edited 3 times in total.

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#2 Post by Cafechan » Sat May 24, 2014 4:23 am

Oooh, downloading this!! Will play tomorrow and give my review!

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#3 Post by Sleipnir56 » Sat May 24, 2014 4:57 pm

This was a super short game, but I really liked the message you put in it. Also, the writing was well done. Felt sorry for Cathrine and how she had to battle the problems in her life. We all have to do that. Sophie would defiantly be a good friend. She reaches out to people she doesn't even know and I like that. Good job :D

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#4 Post by SilverSnow » Sun May 25, 2014 9:12 am

Played this game and must say that it was really nice though short :) Sophie is someone you don't get to meet everyday in this day and time.
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#5 Post by Broodelin » Sun May 25, 2014 10:33 am

Thank you to everyone who's played this little snippet of mine, whether you replied to the thread or not.

This was a rush job to remind a friend that she's important to me, and that she also reached out to me just as Sophie did in this KN. She's a kind and beautiful person who deserves nothing but good things and is just going through a rough patch. If I have my way, she's going to be around a long time yet. :)

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#6 Post by Shiroisalva5 » Sun May 25, 2014 1:57 pm

Played this game while at work. Simple yet important message and the way you visualized it, just made it clear and direct to understand :)

It seems you have in mind to create other stories as well (took a look at your dev blog). Well I'll definetly read them :D
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#7 Post by Cafechan » Sun May 25, 2014 4:19 pm

Short but very sweet! What a good message. The inner dialogue and conversations felt very organic. Good work! :)

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#8 Post by Ionait » Wed Jun 11, 2014 12:28 pm

A beautiful, sweet story. Best 3-5 minutes I've spent today so far! It seemed so realistic too, the way it was written, so it delivers a deep emotional impact in that short time.

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#9 Post by JimG » Thu Jun 12, 2014 1:13 pm

Nicely done.

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#10 Post by Godline » Fri Jun 27, 2014 12:49 am

This was really great. Really simple. Well done!

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