Repercussions [Visual Novel] [Mystery] [All Ages]

[Avnish]

A seemingly innocuous act that we all do is take decisions. Sharad did, too. But what he, and most of us, think as ordinary can turn your life upside down. How? Ascertain the answer by joining Sharad in his journey in "Repercussions".

Screenshots:

http://games.renpy.org/site_media/media ... ot/ss1.JPG

http://games.renpy.org/site_media/media ... ot/ss2.JPG

Statistics:

The game contains 1,009 dialogue blocks, containing 14,008 words and 74,978
characters, for an average of 13.9 words and 74 characters per block.

The game contains 3 menus, 27 images, and 13 screens.

Here's the link to my blog, where you can download it from:

http://avnishbansal9.blogspot.in/2014/0 ... novel.html

The game is compatible with windows, Mac OS X and Linux.

This is my first visual novel and might seem the work of an amateur, but don't let that affect your experience of the story.

Feel free to provide any feedback.
If you encounter any errors, do mention about them and I'll take a look at it.

[Lire]

The story is good. It has clear meaning on the end.
I like your choice of word, even though i'm not that fond of serious-like topic.
Many descriptions in it, but not wasting any on unwanted parts.
Graphic isn't really that good, but still acceptable.
Music, to be honest is annoying and very distracting.

But you still have room to be improve, of course.
I'm not a pro, just your usual player, so don't please don't feel frustrate over my petty arguments.
My own VN's too is in progress and i thought encouraging and pointing the weakness is important for improvement.
Btw, no error at code founds at mine (Windows).
Thanks for this VN's again !

[Avnish]

Thanks for trying my creation, Lire.
I'll make sure to improve my music compositions and graphics in my future projects.
Thanks for pointing that out.
Just out of curiosity, did you get the good ending?

[Lire]

You are welcome.
Yep. Got it on first try~