Skights (Otome GxB, Fairytale Romance)
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Re: Skights [NEW Episode 3] (Otome GxB, Fairytale Romance)
It's not final yet, but either episode 5 or 6 there will be another Lysander x Nessie episode
I won't give away anymore~
I won't give away anymore~
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Re: Skights [NEW Episode 3] (Otome GxB, Fairytale Romance)
Sonya wrote:It's not final yet, but either episode 5 or 6 there will be another Lysander x Nessie episode
I won't give away anymore~
I'm so happy to hear it! Can't wait !!!
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Re: Skights [NEW Episode 3] (Otome GxB, Fairytale Romance)
Ummm . . . having a little problem here. your story doesn't appear to like my Mac with the Safari browser. When I load it, then click on "PLAY", it goes back and starts to reload again. Have tried a couple of times with the same result. Tried again with Firefox, and everything worked properly. Thought you might like to know.
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I'm very interested in Skights since I played the first chapter. Keep it up, It's great and I like how you take all the opinions of the users, so you can improve your VN little by little. Thanks for creating such a fantastic visual novel !
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Lol, I played the 3 options and It's the same all the time... You can only get Colin or what? XD
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Lol, I played the 3 options and It's the same all the time... You can only get Colin or what? XD
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Re: Skights [NEW Episode 3] (Otome GxB, Fairytale Romance)
I change my mind about Colin. Cassandra brought out the best in him, he seemed so honest and caring around her.
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@philip
Hi! I'll check up what's up with Safari, and get support for that browser. Just to make sure, you have the latest Safari?
@snowflakes
Yes, they're the 'same' for now, but later on the story takes different turns for each path.
@ark99k
Haha, I'm glad you like him more now, but keep your opinions open! ^^
Hi! I'll check up what's up with Safari, and get support for that browser. Just to make sure, you have the latest Safari?
@snowflakes
Yes, they're the 'same' for now, but later on the story takes different turns for each path.
@ark99k
Haha, I'm glad you like him more now, but keep your opinions open! ^^
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Re: Skights [NEW Episode 3] (Otome GxB, Fairytale Romance)
I got around to playing Episode 2, and I must say, a greeeeeeeeeat improvement from episode 1! I loved it. Nessie had plenty of fantastic scenes, and I'm interested in how the paths will turn up. I will post another comment once I finish episode 3.
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Skights III-A was beautiful, hahaha. I loved it. I think I like Nessie and Casey-- I mean Cassandra equally now! Waaaaah~
Also, Colin is starting to become a really... curious character. Haha. I wonder what that guy's up to?
I can't wait for the next episode!
Also, Colin is starting to become a really... curious character. Haha. I wonder what that guy's up to?
However, my gripe with the writing is back! I don't know if it's a personal preference, haha, but... my dear, perhaps you use ellipses way too much? Haha, not that it affects the story. The story is still as hooking as the first two episodes.
Anyway, awesome work as always! I loved all the transitions and the animation. Ooooh, so pretty. I can't wait for the next episode!
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I'll tone it down next time then. I used ellipsis not for the writing, but for giving room to show changes in facial expressions without saying any dialogue, like films when they show cut scenes of changes in actor's facial expressions, but I guess that technique isn't work quite as well as I wanted to.
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Re: Skights episode 2 (Otome GxB, Fairytale Romance)
Yesss I did the TV Tropes page for ittt =w=Sonya wrote:@plaster
haha, glad to see another Cafe Rouge fan xD
also Chasing the Moon is kind of my jam now.
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Omigosh, so you're the person? When I saw the page and read what was below, I was like OMG this is so hilarious. I had to include it with Cafe Rouge's thread ;u;plaster wrote:Yesss I did the TV Tropes page for ittt =w=Sonya wrote:@plaster
haha, glad to see another Cafe Rouge fan xD
also Chasing the Moon is kind of my jam now.
Thanks SO much for making it, the team and I were so honored!
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Oh, I get it now. Well, then if it's really needed, I suggest you use only three ellipsis points? The only reason they got so distracting after a while is that you used too many points in the same sentence. ^^ I'm actually a huge fan of ellipses. Hahaha.Sonya wrote:@Ran08
Thanks for another another review, I'll definitely work to improve the writing next time
You're welcome! Oh, the writing was good! The... ellipses were my only problem. Haha.
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Re: Skights (Otome GxB, Fairytale Romance)
Ah, you've tried your best for other people's happiness at least so all your hardwork is worth itSonya wrote:It is actually, and worse I'm the only person working on it now. Many people have left because we ran out of funds we saved up from our part time jobs/work study and other people decided to leave and just focus on school. The rest of MY free time is eaten up by college/school, but I try my best to squeeze in whatever time I can into this free game.
So I'm afraid around episode 5 & 6 ish...I'm not sure how many more episodes I can churn out all by myself, especially with no money or capital... haha ^^;
EDIT: BTW, episode/chapter 3 will be out this afternoon *cross fingers* or tomorrow morning~
Thank you, for everything, you're super!!
I'll be really waiting for Skights' progress, can't thank you enough because of this game.. ♥
I don't know how can i help though even if i want to
I've read your review!! and i spoke each words that you wrote when i read it, i don't know why i accidentally do thisRan08 wrote:Awww, thank you! You're awesome. Haha.Anyways... I forgot to link back a review here! Haha. So... here you go~ The date is from the time I first wrote it, haha, even though I published it late. I'm playing Skights III right now! So far so good, haha. Cassandra is my 2nd fave princess. :")
and that "eenie-meenie-miney-mo" thing surprised me a bit cz i've just listened that song some moments ago lol
I think it's a great review, and enough to make people understand what's the basic outline of the episode..
Unless 1 thing, when you mentioned "Peter from Rhyme or Reason" to help describing PL, make sure you make a few picture of his image (i mean like his character personality or re-mentioned what you wrote when you review that "Peter") or just a sneak-peek of that character you mentioned so people will be more sure about what you mean, or maybe attached a hyperlink at the "Peter from Rhyme or Reason" sentence so people can access the review you made about the character mentioned
Well i'm just trying to figure someone who just found your reviews blog, they may haven't read all of your reviews yet(and considering that you've so many reviews in your blog already), so it's important to keep people feels familiar with what you are trying to explain about
I think it's a great review, and enough to make people understand what's the basic outline of the episode..
Unless 1 thing, when you mentioned "Peter from Rhyme or Reason" to help describing PL, make sure you make a few picture of his image (i mean like his character personality or re-mentioned what you wrote when you review that "Peter") or just a sneak-peek of that character you mentioned so people will be more sure about what you mean, or maybe attached a hyperlink at the "Peter from Rhyme or Reason" sentence so people can access the review you made about the character mentioned
Well i'm just trying to figure someone who just found your reviews blog, they may haven't read all of your reviews yet
Aww, I'm gonna catch up to you too soon, just wait me
Re: Skights [NEW Episode 3] (Otome GxB, Fairytale Romance)
Hi!
When are you planning on posting chapter 4?!))
I really can't wait to read it)
When are you planning on posting chapter 4?!))
I really can't wait to read it)
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Heeeeeeey, sorry for the delay, here's chapter 4!
http://joilly.com/play?n=xRRRRRRRR5
Unfortunately this time, it's not a full length episode. Due to some unexpected events that happened, I have to put Skights on hold until Winter 2014.
I wanted to at least release some new content of Skights before it went on hiatus so the beginning of Chapter 4 was released today. I am so sorry to disappoint you guys if anybody was looking forward to a full length episode, but since I am the only person working on this series, with no funding whatsoever, not to mention that this is a free game, I couldn't put this as my first priority especially when unexpected events in my personal life come in my way. I hope you guys are patient with me when I do find time again to continue producing Skights.
http://joilly.com/play?n=xRRRRRRRR5
Unfortunately this time, it's not a full length episode. Due to some unexpected events that happened, I have to put Skights on hold until Winter 2014.
I wanted to at least release some new content of Skights before it went on hiatus so the beginning of Chapter 4 was released today. I am so sorry to disappoint you guys if anybody was looking forward to a full length episode, but since I am the only person working on this series, with no funding whatsoever, not to mention that this is a free game, I couldn't put this as my first priority especially when unexpected events in my personal life come in my way. I hope you guys are patient with me when I do find time again to continue producing Skights.
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