Flying Lessons -super short VN [otome?][fantasy]

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Flying Lessons -super short VN [otome?][fantasy]

#1 Post by 15385bic » Fri Oct 24, 2014 9:16 am

http://www.mediafire.com/download/2kidx ... ns-all.zip
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A very short (under 2000 words) story about a young flower fairy learning to fly.
It features:
2 CGs
Cute little fantasy hybrid creatures

This is what happens when me and Corynth get sidetracked and procrastinate

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#2 Post by EienKasai » Fri Oct 24, 2014 8:44 pm

Just played it, it was cute and short :)
I liked the bad endings, they were funny hehe

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#3 Post by 15385bic » Sat Oct 25, 2014 7:51 pm

EienKasai wrote:I liked the bad endings, they were funny hehe

the bad ones huh? - poor Lotus - she aint ever going to fly in your world ^^'

thanks you for playing~ =D

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#4 Post by gas » Mon Oct 27, 2014 9:16 pm

I like the character design :).
Some idea for a longer "sequel":
-Add a "do it yourself" path. She can learn to fly and she best the others (powa!).
-Add an ending where she doesn't fly but learn she's really good into something else.... uhm, sewing?
-Add the teacher sprite :/?

Whatever, you gave me... 30 seconds of cuteness!
10 ? "RENPY"
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#5 Post by Shaples » Wed Oct 29, 2014 11:35 pm

Short but oh-so-sweet. Thanks for this!

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#6 Post by ColaCat » Sat Nov 01, 2014 11:52 am

Yeah, this was really good. All of your VN's are brilliant, especially the art!
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