The Prisoner [horror][short]

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The Prisoner [horror][short]

#1 Post by qirien » Fri Jan 09, 2015 4:55 pm

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a short horror visual novel

At first I thought she was my friend. A beautiful, mysterious friend, just for me...
I kept her a secret, kept her safe behind glass. And she rewarded me.
But when I wanted her to leave, I realized how perilous she was.

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Re: The Prisoner [horror][short]

#2 Post by shanks » Sat Jan 10, 2015 3:29 pm

This game was a pleasant surprise! It gave me a lot of inspiration, actually.

I love the two soundtracks and for such a short story it's really provocative; there's a unique depth to the character as well. Weird, sort of like an outcast. =x That intro never gets old. Good job.

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Re: The Prisoner [horror][short]

#3 Post by qirien » Wed Jan 14, 2015 2:55 pm

Thank you! It was based on a dream I had, and it affected me so much I just had to write about it.
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Re: The Prisoner [horror][short]

#4 Post by unknown5 » Wed Jan 14, 2015 10:00 pm

your VN definitely has a dreamlike, creepy strangeness to it.

curious ...
i'm guessing choice #2 happened in the dream, yes?
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Re: The Prisoner [horror][short]

#5 Post by qirien » Thu Jan 15, 2015 12:18 pm

Actually, I woke up right before the choice you make near the end... maybe that's why I wanted to write it, to give some sort of closure?

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Re: The Prisoner [horror][short]

#6 Post by Godline » Thu Jan 15, 2015 10:27 pm

As an arachnophobic, this definitely freaked me out. And ahhh, the redback. Australia's finest. ;)
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Re: The Prisoner [horror][short]

#7 Post by 8oni » Sat Apr 04, 2015 10:31 am

I like spider. They are beautiful. So I can understand s/he POV but I won't keep them trapped like that, it's inhuman. So, am I a bad guy to say that I think option 2 work the best for both of them? :?

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