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Have you ever wondered what was going on in your subconscious? Well, now you can, and without the ungodly exorbitant price tag of a professional shrink.
Welcome Test Subject!
-- Let's go for a walk through your subconscious with the help of a guided meditation of sorts. Using 'point and click' and what you write about we can examine all sorts of fun things that are going on inside your head.
For your convenience, what you select and write down is all recorded in a Journal that you can examine whenever you like. (Just remember to save -- often.)
When you're done, the system will tell you what it all means, and unlock the secrets of your mind!

Just keep in mind that it's all in good fun!

Ooh, neat! Downloading for later.

Mad Harlequin wrote:Ooh, neat! Downloading for later.

I hope you like it!

First... whoa. Between the mood crafted by the graphics and music and the creative visualization sparked by the journal questions, this game felt meditative. I found it surprising and enjoyable... and I loved how the flow of the questions created a story/journey.

OokamiKasumi wrote:I hope you like it!

I did! I saw at least one typo (it's instead of its), but nonetheless, I really enjoyed The Walk. I'm definitely going to replay when I'm in a different mood and see how the results differ.

Mad Harlequin wrote:

OokamiKasumi wrote:I hope you like it!

I did! I saw at least one typo (it's instead of its), but nonetheless, I really enjoyed The Walk. I'm definitely going to replay when I'm in a different mood and see how the results differ.

Typo?! Where?
-- Anyway...
I'm glad you liked it. The results will vary pretty wildly depending on your mood.

OokamiKasumi wrote:Typo?! Where?

I'll go back and screencap it as soon as I can---along with any more, should they exist.

Mad Harlequin wrote:

OokamiKasumi wrote:Typo?! Where?

I'll go back and screencap it as soon as I can---along with any more, should they exist.

Thank you, sweety.
-- And I tried so hard to get them all too...

ketskari wrote:First... whoa. Between the mood crafted by the graphics and music and the creative visualization sparked by the journal questions, this game felt meditative. I found it surprising and enjoyable... and I loved how the flow of the questions created a story/journey.

Excellent!
-- That's exactly what I was aiming for -- to induce a meditative, almost hypnotic state so that the player could actually dream awake, then guide them on a journey through their own subconscious.

Yay! I'm glad you liked it.

Screenshots:

Gasp! A typo!

Besides this sort of minor typo---I think I saw something like "the an building" as well---I noticed that some passages contained extra spaces. I don't know if these were intentional, though. Some of the sentences could have been better written or punctuated (I know the capitalization was intentional), but they're not game-ruining. I just notice these things. Heh . . .

Solitude.

I would have written the last part as: "This does not mean that you don't like the company of other people. You're merely extremely selective in your choice of companions."

Glass or ice?

"Winter signifies a very Mature and reserved outlook. You prefer to keep one step back from the world at large, viewing those around you through a pane of glass---or is it ice?"

The missing period.

This last one speaks for itself. I have other quibbles with the text as it's presented, but these fall under the "I wish this were better written or punctuated" part of my post.

I hope these help!

Mad Harlequin wrote:Besides this sort of minor typo---I think I saw something like "the an building" as well---I noticed that some passages contained extra spaces. I don't know if these were intentional, though. Some of the sentences could have been better written or punctuated (I know the capitalization was intentional), but they're not game-ruining. I just notice these things. Heh . . .
. . . I hope these help!

They did indeed!
-- The only one I couldn't find was the first one you mentioned, "the an building".
Version 1.2 loaded and link changed!

Thank you!

Thank you Mad Harlequin! I knew I would have missed some things! I could feel it...

OokamiKasumi wrote:The only one I couldn't find was the first one you mentioned, "the an building".
Version 1.2 loaded and link changed!

Thank you!

No problem! I'm going to see if I can find that one.

AntiquedFae wrote:Thank you Mad Harlequin! I knew I would have missed some things! I could feel it...

With as much text as this game uses, it was pretty much a guarantee that we missed things. Not your fault! This game uses a dizzying array of text combinations.

Mad Harlequin wrote:No problem! I'm going to see if I can find that one.

Warming up the Renpy to make version 1.3!

Okay, so it wasn't "the an building." It's a similar typo, though.

The a clearing in the trees.

Again.

Punctuation trouble and a run-on.

More punctuation trouble.

Subject-verb agreement.

I'm sure this isn't everything, but hopefully these give you a good idea of the tiny problems I've seen. (Why do I do this? I'm nuts.)