NAOMI v1.1 [Kinetic][Transgender Protag][#JamForLeelah2015]

[Bto3]

NAOMI is a story about a young woman coming to grips with herself in a world hostile to her existence.

Download NAOMI 1.1 Here!




Credits
Story Editing courtesy of Kylock!
CG Gallery Code from Leon
Backgrounds from Auro-Cyanide
Base GUI from Luce Jumble/Aurehan
Art by Tomo+

Screenshots



After Effect Visual Novels | Tomo+ | Official Tumblr Post | Twitter | #JamForLeelah on itch.io | Original WIP Thread

[Caveat Lector]

Hey, I'd love to check this out, but I have made three attempts at downloading and opening the file. Every time I try to extract it, I get this error message:

"Central and local directory mismatch for file "NAOMI-1.1-all/NAOMI-1.1-.app/Contents/Info.plist" (general purpose flags - local: 0 hex central: 800 hex)"

[Bto3]

That's really strange! Can I ask what your OS is and what extractor you're using? I've had one other person saying they couldn't open it but that's it.

I'll look into it!

ETA: Are you using WinZip? After a bit of googling that seems to be what comes up in association with that error.
ETA2: I'm reuploading NAOMI, one zip for each OS. I'll post here/ETA again when I'm done.
ETA3: All OS builds are uploaded as their own downloads now! http://bto3.itch.io/naomi

[Rinima]

*claps*

That was beautiful.

[Caveat Lector]

That seems to have done the trick, thanks!

EDIT: Finished a couple of minutes ago, and overall I'd say it was well-done. I liked how you sensitively handled the subject, and respectively portrayed Naomi. But there are certain elements that make me wish this was a bit longer and it could delve into if it were longer (like Naomi's relationship with her family, Haiden's own depression, etc.). Great release for #JamForLeelah! Maybe I'll participate next year if I'm not so busy.

[Godline]

It worked fine for me. And honestly, I thought it was great. Poor Naomi! I think there's real potential to do more with these characters! Maybe expand and make a longer version some time? Or have them crop up in something else? It was such a sweet friendship story!

[Rinima]

Maybe expand and make a longer version some time?

2nd this x 100000000
Pleeeeeeeeease!

[Bto3]

*claps*

That was beautiful.

Thank you so much!

That seems to have done the trick, thanks!

Wonderful! It seemed to be primarily a download error (not getting all the pieces it needed/adding in random pieces it DOESN'T need), so I hoped a small download might fix that! Thanks for letting me know about the trouble though! I think I'm covered now!

It worked fine for me. And honestly, I thought it was great. Poor Naomi! I think there's real potential to do more with these characters! Maybe expand and make a longer version some time? Or have them crop up in something else? It was such a sweet friendship story!

Thank you thank you! I do have plans to work with the characters more, but this particular chapter of their story is done, aside from an update with perhaps a couple of CGs. Hopefully, I'll be going into Haiden's background for NaNoRenO, which would take place before the events of NAOMI and include how they met in the first place!

I love little friendship stories like this myself and I'm so glad to hear that I was able to accomplish something sweet with this!

ETA:

Maybe expand and make a longer version some time?

2nd this x 100000000
Pleeeeeeeeease!

Addressed this above in my reply to Godline (literally just now, haha)!

[Rinima]

Thank you thank you! I do have plans to work with the characters more, but this particular chapter of their story is done, aside from an update with perhaps a couple of CGs. Hopefully, I'll be going into Haiden's background for NaNoRenO, which would take place before the events of NAOMI and include how they met in the first place!

I love little friendship stories like this myself and I'm so glad to hear that I was able to accomplish something sweet with this!

Ohh~! I would love to see that come about!
(not quite sure how you've made me fall in love with these two so quickly but ah well)

[Bto3]

Ohh~! I would love to see that come about!
(not quite sure how you've made me fall in love with these two so quickly but ah well)

Haha! I'm proud of myself then! Thanks for loving them! <3

So unless something terrible happens, I'm going to shoot for NaNoRenO. I do well with time constraints, which is news to me, but not unwelcome news in the slightest!

[Gabrielle3oo]

This looks amazing!! --And that art @-@ aahh, I can't help it but I'm all about the art in these type of games (and of course a good storyline!) I'm sure it'll be wonderful <3

Wait, naomi_bonus zip? ooh, what's dat? I'll take it

~EQUALITYYYY!~

[Bto3]

This looks amazing!! --And that art @-@ aahh, I can't help it but I'm all about the art in these type of games (and of course a good storyline!) I'm sure it'll be wonderful <3

Wait, naomi_bonus zip? ooh, what's dat? I'll take it

~EQUALITYYYY!~

Naomi_Bonus was originally included in the main download (NAOMI-1-1-all) but I forgot to put it in the individual uploads for each OS. It's the animated versions of the little bios in the bonus section and a single large image of the credits.

[KittyKatStar]

Just want to thank you for releasing this. It was a short and sweet story, so major kudos to everyone who worked on it. Thank you.

[Bto3]

Just want to thank you for releasing this. It was a short and sweet story, so major kudos to everyone who worked on it. Thank you.

Thank you for reading! And thank you for the feedback! <3

[ebi-hime]

Aw, this was a sweet story. The art is really, really adorable, and I really like the GUI - and also the font you used for the character names haha.
I loved the sketch in the extras section of Haiden and Naomi, it was so cute. With all the dokis~
The character profiles were also a really nice touch - it's a good way to dispense information you can't fit into the main bulk of the story XD

It was short, but the ending seemed like a good place to leave off. I guess the ending seems fairly hopeful, despite the bleak implications about Naomi's less-than-acepting parents. At least she has Haiden to help her? ;_;

Hm, I think it was a little bit 'blunt' about some rather important issues, like Haiden's depression and Naomi's relationship with her parents, and glossed over it quite quickly, but it's only a short VN so it's understandable.

Good job! n_n;