Oh gosh, I really appreciate all the heartfelt feedback. ;__; (I'm so sorry for being so slow to reply orz)
@Kokoro Hane I'm glad I got it right!! Thank you, I'm looking forward to your VN blog!
Yes, there are other endings! Only one of them talks about what happened though.
Hahaha, I'm so glad you appreciated that part when Thirteen mistakes their relationship.
I've seen it happen to my other friends and their siblings too, so I thought it must be a unique experience to close brothers and sisters LOL. My sister and I are both girls, so it never happened to us. I wanted to keep in mind how it was different for them in other ways!
@neuropsy Wow, your comment was so poetic and detailed. I'm honestly blown away by your words. Thank you, thank you so much for playing and taking the time to express your feelings so beautifully. I really am honoured you enjoyed the game so much! ;_;
I understand what you mean about dreams too. Sometimes, even if you know you're dreaming, it's hard to shake yourself awake or to be completely sure of it. That dream sounds pretty scary, not because anything terrible happened, but because it felt so realistic. Thank you for the offer!! If I do want to write about dreams again, I will definitely ask.
@HnubNtuj Thank you! I had to rewrite
the default ending
a few times because it's the first time I've written anything emotionally intense, so I'm glad my feelings got across! I'm glad you enjoyed the game and the soundtrack too!
@Ghost-Rain Wow, thank you! I had an emotional time writing the script, but I wasn't sure how to articulately express myself, so I didn't know if my feelings came across. I'm really, honestly thankful that you were so moved. ;_;
The music are all royalty free! I'll put up a zip file with all the music and a note where I sourced them from, as well as links to their sites. I'm glad you enjoyed them!
Soundtrack Download:
Dropbox Link
Kevin MacLeod and
Deceased Superior Technician
Yes, there's one more ending! I have a guide for all the ends in my first post (under a spoiler tag) if you would like to follow it! I don't think it's as painful as the others (I personally liked it a lot HAHA)
Yes, the unsettling feeling of not knowing whether you're awake or not is the feeling I wanted to put into the Denial End. I wanted to have an open end for people who really don't want them to be dead, but I also didn't want to confirm whether they're alive or not. I'm glad it felt unsettling!
My sister actually got the Denial End as her first end too, and she said she liked it, because she felt like it was easier to go back to a simpler time even if she wasn't sure if it was real or not. In a way, I feel like "Denial" is the most fitting title for that end.
Thank you so much for playing it and taking the time to let me know how you felt!
@Feral Phoenix Thank you so much for the fanart! I saw it on tumblr and was so blown away! She's just so adorable in your art style. Q//A//Q Thank you also for the rec, I'm really honoured! (Also, I like the sound of some of the other games. I'll have to give them a try!)