Sweet Nothings [BxB] Slice Of Life

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Sweet Nothings [BxB] Slice Of Life

#1 Post by SheeplyWolf » Tue May 12, 2015 2:28 am

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Sweet Nothings is about a 15 year old American teenager who had to move to Japan with his family after his mom got remarried. At first, Jacen Tokomato didn't like the culture change and he was sure that he would never make any friends until he met his classmate, Daisuke Namura. The both of them quickly became fast friends and started helping each other out, especially when Jacen decides to try out for the school's soccer team, but that's not all. Not only does Jacen has to deal with the struggles of moving to an unfamiliar country, but he also has to deal with the fact that he is starting to fall head over heels for a third year at his school. Nobody said being a teenager was easy. Especially for Jacen when he has to overcome his newfound sexuality, friendships, relationships, exams, family and above all, Japan.



This is my VERY first visual novel that I created. I wrote this story a long time ago and I thought that it would've been cool to turn it into a visual novel game. 8) Feel free to leave feedback. No matter if it's positive or helpful advice. I do plan on creating more visual novel games in the future. Also, this game took me a week to complete so it's short.


The game contains 1,422 dialogue blocks, containing 15,839 words and 81,784
characters, for an average of 11.1 words and 58 characters per block.


CREDITS:
Character Sprites: Bass Novel
BG art: Bass Novel
Music: Youtube's video creator & a few other artists
Engine: Ren'py
Written by: SheeplyWolf

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#2 Post by Mikaren » Tue May 12, 2015 2:53 am

I ma currently downloading it right now!
i'l give review after that ^^

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#3 Post by Mikaren » Tue May 12, 2015 5:33 am

Done playing it!
here are my reviews!
HITOTSU!(please don't mind me by the way what i mean is [first!])
First i think this review would be about the post.you should add kinetic to the thread title but some people doesn't really care thou, then also you should give more screenshot of the game soo people could see how is this game look like rather than only the titlescreen.

FUTATSU!(please don't mind me by the way what i mean is [second!])
this time it's about the game ^^" soo far i have fun playing it but i think the game is not really that realistic for the writing style.for example on the beginning of the game isn't knowing someone a gay should be more surprising then when the MC(MAIN CHARACTER) is saying he like shin daisuke should be more surprised even though he himself is a gay or bisex.on every piece of the world when someone actually told other he or she a gay or a lesbian or bisex people who been told would be super surprised(Except if they were in gay bar or Lesb bar).

MITTSU!(please don't mind me by the way what i mean is [third!])
I hope more game will be coming from you!
by the way do you have any blog or do you have a facebook or twitter or deviantart account?
thanks!

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#4 Post by SheeplyWolf » Tue May 12, 2015 12:31 pm

Mikaren wrote:
Thanks for your review and thanks for playing! I was gonna add more screenshots, but this is my first time posting on this forum so I had trouble figuring out how this forum works. xD I'll be adding more screenshots soon.

I'm a Youtube gamer so I can give you my Youtube channel name (you can contact me there) and I can also give you my twitter. I've been debating on whether or not I should set up an official blog for my visual novels. ><

Youtube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCUFMnn ... qczU3KYajA
Twitter: https://twitter.com/SheeplyWolf

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#5 Post by Mikaren » Tue May 12, 2015 2:44 pm

SheeplyWolf wrote: Thanks for your review and thanks for playing! I was gonna add more screenshots, but this is my first time posting on this forum so I had trouble figuring out how this forum works. xD I'll be adding more screenshots soon.

I'm a Youtube gamer so I can give you my Youtube channel name (you can contact me there) and I can also give you my twitter. I've been debating on whether or not I should set up an official blog for my visual novels. ><

Youtube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCUFMnn ... qczU3KYajA
Twitter: https://twitter.com/SheeplyWolf
Awesome!

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#6 Post by Darklime » Fri Jun 26, 2015 8:27 am

I found the story cute, i enjoyed the light-hearted feelings.
Thank you for sharing your first game and i'll wait for a (maybe ?) next one :)

(i am not fluent in english, sorry for my bad writing or if it is not clear. i'm trying to improve myself)

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#7 Post by SheeplyWolf » Fri Dec 18, 2015 8:49 pm

Darklime wrote:I found the story cute, i enjoyed the light-hearted feelings.
Thank you for sharing your first game and i'll wait for a (maybe ?) next one :)

(i am not fluent in english, sorry for my bad writing or if it is not clear. i'm trying to improve myself)
Thanks for playing it and I'm glad you enjoyed it! I do plan on making more in the future~ And don't worry about your English. It's perfectly fine to me!

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