First off, let me say I LOVE LOVE LOVE this game. Thank you so much for making it and all of the hard work you obviously put into it.
1. Which bachelor you like the most? and why?
Mitra, I can't get over the polite types that don't treat you like property. Reksa was second while Rama was a bit too tragic and immature for me. Only one slight problem I saw with Mitras character I listed below.
2. What makes you consider to play this game?
I have to admit it, the artwork. I have browsed every novel listed in the visual novel data base (some listings were OMG YUCK, my poor eyes) and lets admit it, the first thing you notice is the artwork. No matter how well written a story is, it is hard to immerse yourself into something that is drawn out in distracting childlike scribbles. This was very beautifully done and the characters were beautiful. They caught the eye right off making me want to download and play immediately. Wow!
3. Overall, what do you think about this visual novel? and what element stands out the most? (art? story? character?)
Yes, Yes and YES. It was the artwork that first attracts and wants you to read to get to know these beautiful characters but afterwards, the story completely draws you in. There is so much action that it never gets boring and enough choices and branches that you can keep playing again and again without getting bored. The character development was very well done allowing you to really feel you got to know and understand them and be able to care for their outcomes.
Also loved the encyclopedia and how you were able to bring so many cultural references into the game. Adding this was a wonderful touch that was able to teach us so much, thank you!
This was a wonderful and well done visual novel all round, you can tell it took a long time and I loved it so much, thank you!
4. Do you have any question or constructive critiques? I will read all the comments and reply to them like I do in Lemmasoft.
Warning: Major Spoilage:
OK, While I loved the game and Mitra is still my favorite character I do have to admit that there was one thing missing from his character route, that was the personal growth/breakthrough he got from the heroine. The Reksa and Rama both had that and most great romance have this but when reading through Mitra's story it was missing.
Rama: Started out: HATED LOMA/ Loved the war hoping everyone died Ah-HA moments- When he had a knife to Tamara and she trusted him. When she spoke to him and made him listen to her about his family in Loma
Thanks to Tamara by the end - Forgave Loma - Was willing to sacrifice to end the war
Reksa: Started out: Thought he was puny and weak - Hated Avians Ah-HA moments - When he realized she didn't think he was weak and thought he was good looking, when he was fighting and she pointed out he was stronger and faster, she had faith
Thanks to Tamara by the end - Was a strong fighter with faith in his abilities, worked WITH the Avians to end the war
Mitra: Started out: Perfect Gentleman, Shy, Hates public displays of affection Ah-Ha moments - The ceremony (No, wait, he CHEATED and kissed her chin, also had excuse that his courtship had to be declared publicly...still the perfect gentleman). Well, they kissed in the...nope, she initiated that quick peck..ummmmm
Good end - He stayed the perfect Gentleman, followed the customs, still blushing. He said he was "selfish" but never once showed it. That is what was missing from his story line, no personal growth or development on his part due to her involvement besides that he just fell in love. It was kinda funny that he was the Largest of the warriors and I was still mentally screaming at the screen "Grow a pair and Kiss her already!" but he stayed just too perfect and shy.
While most love interests will reach that breakthrough of personal growth due to the heroine, Mitra was almost too perfect with no other "faults" except for his shyness. The only way he could have achieved this was if he had let go of some of that "gentlemanly" behavior for her, maybe if he had grabbed her for one huge toe-curling kiss in front of everyone before fighting the Komodo's when they attacked who cares that half of 2 tribes are watching. Then his claim to be selfish would seem more realistic.
Don't get me wrong, I still like him best because I just like hunky gentlemen, I just wanted to point out that I felt his story line was missing that breakthrough moment/character growth of being saved by Tamara. That is only my opinion though. I still LOVE the game.
5. Last but not least, if I make another visual novel, will you consider buying it? via patreon or kickstarter that is (since I need to eat, electricity, and such things when I make VNs xD)
Absolutely but only if it doesn't keep crashing.
This one is better than some I have paid for, more beautiful and better written and able to replay again and again without ever getting bored but if I paid for a game that kept crashing I would demand my money back. Fix that issue and it will be well worth the money!
Fantastic job and thank you so much!