Thanks for replying! For grammar, I wouldn't mind helping you look out for mistakes when the ren py version is done! I'd love to replay the game all over again! X3 it was really fun! And maybe the best otome game I've ever played so far! I've downloaded a lot of otome games, but most I never finished because I didn't like it or I didn't like it enough to start :'D I still have plenty of games downloaded and I never got to start. So, in other words, I can be a proofreader if you'd like!
This game has a super interesting story, nice characters with interesting background information, and the Indonesian things that were added it made the game really unique! I can proudly say that this game is the first that has made me so interested in the characters that I went for the bad ends :3
I finished Mitra's route and it was enjoyable :3 He said some really cute things (and I was smiling all teh way through) and I'm sure they'll be a lovely couple
I really like the part where you mentioned the wings performance! For his route though, there was this part after where Mitra showed Tamara the picture of his family and it crashed all of the sudden (I forgot to save as well ;w;) I freaked out and reopened it and I crashed again :'D (but I saved that time!) However, I pressed skip and skipped over the crashing part and all was well. It so sad that Rama couldn't be saved in Mitra's route as well as Reksa:< He was a bit creepy, but I still love him!
Reksa (did I spell it right? X3) is still my favorite <3I love him! Mitra and Rama are on a tie for me since Rama's good end was really good but his bad end creeped me out :'D I surprisingly loved all of the guys! Which in most cases, I usually dislike one or more.
Are you planning to do another visual novel? If it's paid I can't buy it but I'd love to be notified so I can at least play the demo *w*
You got me super interested in Indonesian things now! Especially names! I will be using those names for sure! I had no idea Durians were Indonesian. I love Durians and they taste soooo good *w* My mother on teh other hand, dislikes it and my brother too. My father loves it like me though ;'D The whole family is split. I was so surprised when those things were introduced! One of the reasons this game is so fun hehe.
And could I perhaps draw fanart of one of your characters? I'm not a super good artist so they'll probably look like children :'D Asking for your permission first incase I can't :3 I'd love to draw Asih! And maybe Ayu, I like her hair!
Speaking of Asih, could you give me some background info of how she and Yuda met and got together? *w* they are my most favorite cute couple!
That's so considerate of you :'D
The ren'py version might have some differences with this novelty version, but it will be minor details. I'm not planning to fix the grammar again since I want to leave it as it is to remind me how my first step went x'D the imperfection is a part of a whole :'3
But I do need proofreaders for the next project if you're interested? (though, this is gonna be a long while before I call you 'cause I take a long time to do research and planning for plot.)
I'm so glad to see your love for my boys like this QuQ
and I got you interested in Indonesian names & cultures too! (YAY for reached goals!)
oh, and please do!
I really love it when people do fanarts for me :'3 Don't mind the technique! as long as you have fun and proud of it, I will too!
As for Asih and Yuda x'D
and lol. I understand about Durian complications xD
While I was in malaysia, I met brazilians who hated Durians with passion (I think because of its strong smell?).
My co-boss bought him durian cakes for them and dared them to eat it xDD boy, that was fun. It depends on each individual I guess :3
As for Yuda & Asih's history :'3 I think I'll tell you a little <3:
Yuda met Asih for the first time when he was adopted by Granny Sukma (Yuda was 15 years while Asih was 14 years). It was Asih's kindness that pulled Yuda to her and it irritated him whenever she was taken advantage of x'D
There were some complications tho; Asih was Avian-Herbivore while Yuda was Avian-Carnivore. Naturally, it took awhile until Asih can cook something that Yuda likes xD
They ended up together after lots of awkward moments in Yuda's part.
Oh and don't worry, my projects will be posted here when I'm ready
Yay, I was finally able to play Rama's route... and now I'm not so sure about Mitra being my favourite anymore. It's so hard to choose! I do love sweet guys but Rama reminds me of my SO with his antics and stubbornness. And Reksa was also great, in his own way. Let's just say all the guys are great and be done with it. (Truly though, usually an otome game has at least one guy I don't like at all, which wasn't the case here)
Rama's route was rather different from the other two and I'm glad I didn't skip over it, that would have been a shame. I can see how this would be a 'true end', it does feel a little like that. I'm glad Rama was able to go back to the village, his story was so sad in the other two routes. (for that alone I'd pick Rama, hahaha, just so he can survive). I guess it was a bit of a frustration that you could do nothing to help him in the other routes.
But he was cute in a stubborn way, adorable really. I think his appearance really grew on me, by the end I was like... this dude is actually gorgeous, how did I not see that before. Of course he was creepy at times as well, but then again, that's no real surprise. (I agree with the one who said it was sad we didn't have a kissing CG, but I guess Rama already had a lot of CGs)
I looooved the scene with the "angels". So pretty! Also I might have to find some durians this summer in The Netherlands, though I've heard mixed things. Either people really love it, or really hate it.
Yeah I totally did not expect to like Mitra, (even knowing he was sweet, but I dunno, he really grew on me) but I think I picked wisely for my first route. Lots of blushing and excited squealing, there. I also think playing Rama last was really nice, instead of having to see him sad again in Reksa's route. As for not seeing Mitra's good end at first, I picked all the right options, but it seems to skip over some text some of the time, so I didn't see all of it the first time around. Luckily I had saved the choice point with the goddess, and so I could try again once I noticed Reksa's end being much longer.
I think your game was just the right length as well. If you made it longer it would have been a bit too long, but this way, it wasn't. Plus the story was interesting enough that I wasn't thinking "when is it ooooover".
Also, for the music, I liked a lot of them actually:
The title screen music, the piano track while planning strategies, the guitar and piano tracks that usually plays during romantic scenes, and the adventurous track that sounds like a flute but not quite (ugh it's so hard to describe music), and the battle music were all very good! You certainly chose the music well, I really liked most of them.
And no problem, Chiel! I like leaving detailed feedback.
I'm so glad I made your day! I can proudly say I've been playing your game for the last... four or so days in the holiday period. Not a bad way to spend your time, I must say. Sorry for my ranting, lots of thoughts about the game hahaha.
I'm glad you're continuing with visual novels! You have talent, definitely. (the art, as well, very gorgeous - the title screen especially is SO pretty)
Also, if you ever need a proofreader, I volunteer!
You like all the bachelors? QuQ *cue happy dance*
and lol, I agree when you said Rama was cute in a stubborn way xD tho, I admit, he can be pretty difficult to deal with.
I was planning to do 1 kissing CG for each bachelor, but Rama's psychology doesn't allow it :'D He's really committed and loyal by default, so it's not possible for him to kiss Tamara when he's still in dilemma x'D (lol, do I make him sound like he's PMSing?)
But in the end, I drew too many CGs for him ;u;
and the kiss at the epilogue was very brief that it took Tamara by complete surprise. I think it will be better for the viewers to imagine his shy-a little reluctant kiss than to give a CG that only last 2-3 seconds u.u
about the durians:
I was surprised when both you and Harmony mentioned durians consecutively :'D
But I do understand about its complications. I guess it depends on each individual?
While I was in malaysia, I met brazilians who hated Durians with passion (I think because of its strong smell?). My co-boss bought him durian cakes for them and dared them to eat it xDD boy, that was fun.
I'll be waiting to hear what you think about durian after you try it :3
now, about the sound track:
the title screen BGM is RPG_Theme by Eric Matyas
you can see his free tracks here: http://soundimage.org/
the forest, flute BGM and two of my battle BGMs (In Reksa & Purba scene) were originals made by two of my talented friends :'D sadly, they want the music to belong exclusively to my VNs so I can't provide download links for you >.<
The others are from Kevin Macleod:
- Exotic Battle
- Prelude and Action
- Touching Moment series (for romantic moments)
I'm very surprised to have these two talented composers provide some free tracks to use! :'3
Katherynliza wrote:Sorry, I got upset. I redownloaded and restarted the game and now it working. I got upset because I thought I tried everything to fix. I love Mitra path and I got upset I couldn't platy other paths because I think this best otome game I played.
It's alright, I understand that frustration x'D
I'm honored that you consider it's the best otome game you played :'3 Just be more patient next time x'D
I'm also planning to use ren'py for the next projects so rest assured!
Hi!! I just wanted to let you know congrats on the release!!! And I loved the game and it is now on the top of my list for best games <3 thank you so much for all the hard work you put into this game and thank you for this game it is really amazing though it had some bugs (but I didn't get many). Once again congrats!!! And good luck in the future
Hi UndeadQueen! and thanks for your support! :'D
You're very welcome and it's my pleasure to see you enjoyed the game so much! ^.^-)/
I'm really happy for you since you get to play without too many troubles! Gosh, I'm touched when you said it's on top of your list Q_Q you're too kind!