First of all, I want to announce that Nusantara's new versions are now released! It's now available for Mac, Linux, and Windows user <3 I'll make a new thread for new people to post their opinions there x')
Now for the replies <3
Adriana72 wrote:Hey! I have wanted to leave a review of this game for some time now, I played it when this topic had 4 pages or so. But I loved the game so much that I didn't know what exactly to say, because I could talk about it, like... too much, lol. I guess I will use the questions you wrote xD
(Aaand sorry for the bad english.)
1. Which bachelor you like the most? and why? The moment I saw Reksa I knew I would go for him first and I was sure he would always be my favourite. I'm not so fond of "tsundere like" characters or anything related to tsunderes. But tsunderes don't deserve to be compared with Reksa (?) he is much deeper than that, more charming, funny, more everything. I loved his path, both his bad and happy end.
But then...
... Rama.
I don't know where to start. I really don't. Just Rama. He is bae. I both cried and laughted in his path. He is so unique, so misterious, so not-what-he-seems, so dark, so flawed (YES, I love flaws in characters). I can't find the words *-* You said that his path was like a roller coaster, and I like this kind of roller coaster (Not the real ones tho xD) like, very much. I could talk about all of his scenes, I loved all of them. For example, when Tamara ate the durian, omg. That scene had a second meaning, right? (Or I'm just overthinking, lol) Rama is like a durian, he "smells bad" (Not literally, okay!? XD) but in the end he is... idk, best fruit (?). Aaand I laughted quite a lot (It's hard to make me laugh, too) at the end of that scene.
What more? Of course when Tamara finds him and they share their past, it was really beautiful too. BUT then, later, when he runs to Tamara's side after her and Sukma being atacked... I remember he was like his usual self and then... there was a glint of despair in his eyes or something. It was unexpected: that detail hit me hard, right in the feels, because it showed he was so scared of losing someone important again, of losing Tamara... wah <3
It's just that all of his path was full of emotions, I expected the drama to end when he went back to the village but no, and yay to that. It only ended on the very end, and yay to that.
So, yeah. Rama is my favourite xDD
And about Mitra, I actually liked him more than I expected. He isn't my type, but he grew on me. He is really cute when he is embarrased, and I loved how the romance was developed by avian's traditions, it was really original and... effective on my heart (?). His wings are beautiful and I like it when guys show affection earlier than mcs. But more importantly, I think his character is necesary to have a balanced group of balchelors... Maybe more people like Reksa or even Rama, but that doesn't mean anything.
2. What makes you consider to play this game? Actually, everything. It's true that art is an important factor for me, and your art is pretty beautiful and unique (I really like your style!), however, I think it wasn't exactly the art style what standed out first for me. What caught my attention first was... the character design! I mean, wow... every character has their own style, even if they are similar in some aspects, like their dark skin. Actually, I loved the dark skin (?) it looks so pretty on all of them. And Tamara, her design had personality, too. She isn't the common cliché heroine not even on her visual design and I really like that. I think the design that I like the most is Reksa's... Or maybe Rama and his cool blue eyes... *tries not to fangirl*
Ehrr back to the topic, after seeing the visuals, I watched the trailer and- omg! I got so hyped about it! It's not easy to get me hyped, I usually don't let my expectations too high, but yes, I got hyped. Then I rushed to download the game.
3. Overall, what do you think about this visual novel? and what element stands out the most? After playing the game, I would say that the most memorable thing are the characters and how well their personalities and backgrounds were written and developed.
It's notable that your game is pure, too (?). I mean... I don't know how many otomes you might have played or their quality, but... I think your game is not influenced by "typical otomes" and their annoying clichés. Your game puts a big emphasis on the actual plot and the side characters, and that is really refreshing. This doesn't affect in a bad way the romance, it makes it more special and the game itself more balanced. Oh, I think the romance is pretty well developed, too. It felt natural, not too fast, not too slow... with lots of heartwarming scenes all over the game (And heartwrenching ones too... I love when my heart is crushed into pieces by a story (?) to me, it means it's good).
What was the question again...? XD
Ah, yes. Well, overall... I love it. That's it o3o
By the way, I found really nice that plot twist when the blessing is revealed to be a curse because of their greed.
4. Do you have any question or constructive critiques? I haven't been bothered that much by bugs and it's not even your fault that there are so many, so yeah. Critiques? My biggest critique is the dark skin blush (?). I mean, is too red and too strong and it looks really weird in my opinion. Tamara blushes are okay, but... I think dark skins don't blush like that. And the blush layer is usually over the hair one, so it's even more weird. It doesn't have to be so visible, a faint blush and maybe a slight change on the expression will already melt our hearts.
And that was my critique xD
This isn't related to the question, but the backgrounds are sooooooo beautiful! Like wow, backgrounds take a lot of time and you did them so detailed and everythig... You worked hard, I admire you o-o
5. Last but not least, if I make another visual novel, will you consider buying it? via patreon or kickstarter that is. Absolutely yes. I will stalk you for more games, I'm sure they'll be great! Good luck with them ^v^/
Hi Adriana! I'm really happy when I read your heartfelt review here QuQ -and don't worry, your english is not bad x'D if you're bad then me too lol. Your message to me is clear as the day <3
1. Aww, thank you for giving all of them a chance!
Yup, Reksa is... complicated in a way? It was the first time I create a tsundere character so I was wondering and worrying if I do it right or not -but I'm glad people loves him very much QuQ
He is one of the few reasons why I create Nusantara after all hehe.
he's also surprisingly easier to write the more I indulged into his character (not like
someone who seems to have a double personality ahjdfajsgdf)
and lol, I applaud you for your sharp sense about the Durian's double meaning :') At first, I didn't think about it too much about why Rama loves Durian so much -it just seems natural for him to like it. I dunno why but it just clicked in my mind -and then you came and tell me how similiar Rama is with Durian (the bad smell, but delicious once you get used to it) and I was like 'oooohh, so that's why!'. lol, I'm embarrassed to say that I wrote that but I didn't realize it could be interpreted that way >///<
I was both surprised and pleased at how well you read Rama
No one had read him so thoroughly like that :') *glomps*
and yesshh, Mitra is a sweetheart <3 I'm glad you agree with me QuQ
2. Yup, we need more 'dark, tall, and handsome' bachelors out here! xDD I had some fetish about dark-skinned men + animal traits so I guess you can expect more in the future :'))
and thank you! I'm really happy when you told me you like my art, but do tell me if some backgrounds hurts your eye or not x'D I've been conscious with how 'bright' and 'saturated' my backgrounds are lately. It gives a 'child story book' feeling and it kinda contradicting itself with the dark-story-line? O_O; tell me what you think?
3. Phew, you have no idea how relieved I am to hear you say 'the pace felt natural' >< I still worry about that sometimes but thanks to you I've gained more confidence now
4. Ohh, yes about the blush, I'm still wondering about HOW do dark-skinned people blush? x'DD but yes, I'll make it lighter next time. maybe a little over their ears? I've never blush in my entire life so I'm not sure about this but I'll do my best!
5. aww,
YAYmorestalker -I mean, thank you very much! I'm glad to hear that! -^.^-)/
theshrimplord wrote:theshrimplord wrote:uugggghhh I really wanna play but the file isn't working /: I've tried redownloading and restarting, it tries to open in internet explorer but never does. Frustrating.
hi shrimplord! This is the first time someone tell me about this >< here's some guide to open the file after you download it:
1. Extract the .rar file using WinRar
2. Open the file and open the application file
3. If it doesn't work and an error window pops up about some .dll file missing, that means you have to re-install your DirectX! (Minimum ver.9c)
Finally found that I can't play it on newest version of Windows. what a bummer. Hopefully when you rebuild, it's available as a file you don't need all the crazy extraction and requirements for. Looking forward to one day playing![/quote]
the new versions is here!
https://sweetchiel.itch.io/new-nusantar ... inged-ones
Virelai wrote:Before I answer these questions, I'll have to say I'm so sad that it crashes. I played this a month or two ago? (I actually can't remember but it's been a while) and I remember I totally gave up on it eventually because it just kept on crashing at one particular scene and I was so distraught and upset I ended up stopping it. I really do wish the entire game played out and worked for me--I didn't really pay too much attention to what made it crash but I'm assuming it's the program you used to create it?
This is honestly one of the most well-made games that I've seen out on this forum, and I'm just so sad it didn't work out for me ; -;
ANYWAYS!
1. Which bachelor you like the most? and why?
To be honest, I don't have one. The reason why is because each character is so different. Like you have your typical tsundere/mysterious character, and then your super-nice-handsome-11/10 boy, and then some really shady af flirt. However, even though the characters have completely different personalities, each story is so well thought out that it's worth playing everything single route. I personally go for the brooding character, and I can tell you that for this novel, I was extremely happy with each of the character.
2. What makes you consider to play this game?
Not this game in particular, but towards any visual novel, I look at the synopsis and see if it stands out to me. Additionally, the art is a huge bonus but I've been through many VNs with art that have different styles that maybe I didn't like and others like? So as long as the story is gr8 and the boys look h0t I'm gucci. LOL. Storyline definitely is the final point for me though.
3. Overall, what do you think about this visual novel? and what element stands out the most? (art? story? character?)
The art was what caught my eye first of all. I'm a sucker for supernatural sorts of novels. After reading the synopsis, I was super excited to play it and I wasn't disappointed (even though it crashed BUT STILL I LOVED IT DON'T WORRY). The storyline for me was a basic one, it wasn't to the level of being "predictable" I would say, but it was a pretty generic storyline. However, the reason why I like this plot in specific is because it's unique. Even though its 'basic' IMO, it's still extremely special due to its focus on side characters, and it's something that's distinguishable as its own, ya feel?
(skip 4)
5. Last but not least, if I make another visual novel, will you consider buying it? via patreon or kickstarter that is (since I need to eat, electricity, and such things when I make VNs xD)
I definitely would--if it doesn't crash ;-;
I'm so sad that it crashed for me I'm going to be totally honest. ;-; </3
But wonderful job on this novel, I would 11/10 recommend this to anyone. Double thumbs up to you!
Hi Virelai! First of all, I'm sorry for the crashes >< it also makes me sad to see many people cannot enjoy my baby to the fullest because of this
but fortunately, the new version is here!
https://sweetchiel.itch.io/new-nusantar ... inged-ones
I'll make a new thread later for new discussion ^.^
1. Thank you very much for giving them all a chance! QvQ I can't ask for more than your appreciation. They're my pride and joy -and I'm extremely happy that you love them too <3
2. I agree! ever since I watched Bakuman anime, the word 'as long as it's interesting' sticks to my mind. I guess it became my motto ever since then >:'D I'll do my best to create more interesting stories in the future, thank you!
3. Aww thank you! I did my best to make it as unique as possible since I want to make people remember it and I guess I did it? x') credits goes to Indonesian cultures (oooh, I love my country)<3
4 & 5. Thank you very much and yes, of course! I'll continue to use Ren'py in the future to avoid/lessen crash problems. So don't worry