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YossarianIII wrote:This is one of the first NaNo titles I downloaded this year since it was released early, and it set a pretty high bar!

I thought the art, the UI, and pretty much everything else about how the game looked was great -- definitely a strong point. But I also liked how the writing

avoided wish fulfillment and let you play as a character who is either kind of callous or well-intentioned but misguided rather than making it seem like the gentleman option was the "true" or only version of the character. I also thought it was interesting that there's a negative outcome of taking a photo, but you're actually kind of rewarded for looking through her wallet -- I like that there were gray areas to your actions and it wasn't a black-and-white morality story.

I also liked the open-ended structure with the objects -- it was a good way to encourage multiple playthroughs.

Two potential bugs:

*When you ask for painkillers, it sounds like Robin brings back coffee and there's a coffee slurping sound?
*Possible continuity error: If you haven't discovered Robin's name by a certain point, she notices, but if you have discovered her name, she doesn't get angry at that point, even though you never use her name. (i.e., she seems to magically know whether or not the MC knows her name before he ever has a chance to say/not say her name. Unless I'm misremembering?)

Also, the one small part that I thought felt out of place was:

if you tell Robin you remember nothing about the night, she gives a detailed explanation. For me, though, the fun was piecing everything together from the objects instead of being told directly. Just a minor point -- it probably stood out to me because the rest of the writing was good at being concise and revealing just enough.

Overall, though, I really liked it! It felt like exactly the right scope for a NaNo project and everything was executed well.

BrightWings wrote:I loved the game! The animation is great (really convincing), the dialogue is organic. Robin is really relatable and feels real. Thank you very much! Great job!

Oh, and if it helps, during one of my runs I somehow caused this:

Full traceback:
File "game/script.rpy", line 2701, in script
if robinis == "weird":
File "D:\Jocuri\Visual novels\One_Night_Stand-1.0-all\renpy\ast.py", line 1648, in execute
if renpy.python.py_eval(condition):
File "D:\Jocuri\Visual novels\One_Night_Stand-1.0-all\renpy\python.py", line 1490, in py_eval
return py_eval_bytecode(code, globals, locals)
File "D:\Jocuri\Visual novels\One_Night_Stand-1.0-all\renpy\python.py", line 1485, in py_eval_bytecode
return eval(bytecode, globals, locals)
File "game/script.rpy", line 2701, in <module>
if robinis == "weird":
NameError: name 'robinis' is not defined

It appeared several times, but I was able to complete the path by pressing 'Ignore'. I think I somehow caused it during the 'selection' phase, I ended up selecting about 5 ?

Is there a way of knowing what the endings are?

More precisely, is there a way to be more than friends that I am somehow missing?

foxrunner2099 wrote:Ive noticed on playing through a few times im no longer able to get the dialogue to show after inspection of her items. Im gonna keep trying but the game seems to keep ignoring this.

BrightWings wrote:Ok, it's been a while so I don't remember exactly. I had been playing for several rounds, trying to see which are the endings. I think I had chosen "She is weird" in the iteration before the bug happened. I might have done it for the first time? Not sure.

If it helps, I uploaded the save file here: http://www.filedropper.com/1-1-lt1.

Not sure if I saved before or after the bug happened for the first time, but quite soon anyway. You will see that it keeps reoccurring until the end of the game.

Kinmoku wrote:

foxrunner2099 wrote:Ive noticed on playing through a few times im no longer able to get the dialogue to show after inspection of her items. Im gonna keep trying but the game seems to keep ignoring this.

Hey sorry for the late response! Do you have any more info on what you were doing/ inspecting? I can't seem to duplicate the bug. Thanks!