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#16 Post by PrangCezca » Tue Mar 29, 2016 9:55 am

1. Did you liked the plot?
Yes. It's so fluffy!
2. What is the first ending that you got?
Best end. :D
3. Who is your favorite character?
Mina!
4. Any critiques?
NOPE!
5. What name did you used?
Iyoko
6. What is the nickname that you used?
Iyo
7. What is the Main heroine's name?
Mina
8. Any questions?
9. Any comments?
8.-9. none!
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CONGRATA ON FINISHING IT! I WAS REALLY LOOKIN FORWARD TO IT! :D
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#17 Post by ebi-hime » Tue Mar 29, 2016 10:34 am

Aw, this was a cute VN - short and sweet. Good job on finishing it!
I think it's pretty impressive you coded in all custom GUI - and it was very nice and pink, too XD;
The voice acting was also a nice touch. The voice actress read her lines well, and her voice really suited the character.
I also enjoyed being able to select names for the heroine and the main character. Naturally, I named them after my own characters from one of my existing stories, because I'm uh... Self-indulgent like that XD;
The plot was a pretty standard one, like you see in a lot of anime/manga, but I liked it.
I actually didn't expect the childhood friend thing, it was quite a surprise.
A note: whenever you write 'I', as in 'I did this' or 'I'll do this', you always need to use a capital 'I'.

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Re: Sweet and Spices (Drama)(Romance)(NaNo'16) DOWNLOAD READ

#18 Post by MimirollCookie » Tue Mar 29, 2016 9:44 pm

ebi-hime wrote:Aw, this was a cute VN - short and sweet. Good job on finishing it!
I think it's pretty impressive you coded in all custom GUI - and it was very nice and pink, too XD;
The voice acting was also a nice touch. The voice actress read her lines well, and her voice really suited the character.
I also enjoyed being able to select names for the heroine and the main character. Naturally, I named them after my own characters from one of my existing stories, because I'm uh... Self-indulgent like that XD;
The plot was a pretty standard one, like you see in a lot of anime/manga, but I liked it.
I actually didn't expect the childhood friend thing, it was quite a surprise.
A note: whenever you write 'I', as in 'I did this' or 'I'll do this', you always need to use a capital 'I'.

But, you did well. Congratulations!
Awwww.... Thanks ebi-hime! BTW, I didn't coded the GUI. We have two programmers. Bonesy0 and yours truly! Bonesy0 coded the GUI then and coded the script. :3
BTW, That "I" problem, I got tired on writing the script, so yeah. :/
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Re: Sweet and Spices (Drama)(Romance)(NaNo'16) DOWNLOAD READ

#19 Post by Zelan » Wed Mar 30, 2016 1:36 pm

1. Did you liked the plot?
Yeeeesss~ It was so sweet. <3
2. What is the first ending that you got?
Best end (for once, I usually get bad ends first. cx)
3. Who is your favorite character?
Probably Mina.
4. Any critiques?
The voice acting was a little quiet. I had to turn the music volume down so that I could hear it. It was very well done, though!
5. What name did you used?
At first I used Zanthe, but when I realized the MC was supposed to be a guy, I used Tristan for all of the other playthroughs. (Tristan and Mina just sounded cute together, hehe)
6. What is the nickname that you used?
Z and then Tris
7. What is the Main heroine's name?
Mina. c:
8. Any questions?
How many endings are there? I got the Best End, the Good End, and the Bad End, but I can't seem to find the Developer's Notes or the Fan Art Gallery.
9. Any comments?
This game is just the most adorable thing ever. cx The best end was super cute, and I loved the background for that end.

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#20 Post by MimirollCookie » Wed Mar 30, 2016 7:58 pm

Zelan wrote:1. Did you liked the plot?
Yeeeesss~ It was so sweet. <3
2. What is the first ending that you got?
Best end (for once, I usually get bad ends first. cx)
3. Who is your favorite character?
Probably Mina.
4. Any critiques?
The voice acting was a little quiet. I had to turn the music volume down so that I could hear it. It was very well done, though!
5. What name did you used?
At first I used Zanthe, but when I realized the MC was supposed to be a guy, I used Tristan for all of the other playthroughs. (Tristan and Mina just sounded cute together, hehe)
6. What is the nickname that you used?
Z and then Tris
7. What is the Main heroine's name?
Mina. c:
8. Any questions?
How many endings are there? I got the Best End, the Good End, and the Bad End, but I can't seem to find the Developer's Notes or the Fan Art Gallery.
9. Any comments?
This game is just the most adorable thing ever. cx The best end was super cute, and I loved the background for that end.
Thanks Zelan! There are 4 ends!
You have to unlock the true end. :)
Thanks Zelan!
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Re: Sweet and Spices (Drama)(Romance)(NaNo'16) DOWNLOAD READ

#21 Post by Zelan » Wed Mar 30, 2016 9:51 pm

MimirollCookie wrote:
Zelan wrote:1. Did you liked the plot?
Yeeeesss~ It was so sweet. <3
2. What is the first ending that you got?
Best end (for once, I usually get bad ends first. cx)
3. Who is your favorite character?
Probably Mina.
4. Any critiques?
The voice acting was a little quiet. I had to turn the music volume down so that I could hear it. It was very well done, though!
5. What name did you used?
At first I used Zanthe, but when I realized the MC was supposed to be a guy, I used Tristan for all of the other playthroughs. (Tristan and Mina just sounded cute together, hehe)
6. What is the nickname that you used?
Z and then Tris
7. What is the Main heroine's name?
Mina. c:
8. Any questions?
How many endings are there? I got the Best End, the Good End, and the Bad End, but I can't seem to find the Developer's Notes or the Fan Art Gallery.
9. Any comments?
This game is just the most adorable thing ever. cx The best end was super cute, and I loved the background for that end.
Thanks Zelan! There are 4 ends!
You have to unlock the true end. :)
Thanks Zelan!
Ahh, so I'm missing an end! I'll keep trying for that, then, but I might need a walkthrough later if I can't figure it out. cx

EDIT: I got it! :D The developer notes were super cool! But you can't have my potato chips. Take all of the Nutella you want, though. ^_^ This game, even though it is short, is polished and really well done and I enjoyed it a lot! Congratulations to the whole team on completing the game.

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#22 Post by MimirollCookie » Wed Mar 30, 2016 10:13 pm

Zelan wrote:
MimirollCookie wrote:
Zelan wrote:1. Did you liked the plot?
Yeeeesss~ It was so sweet. <3
2. What is the first ending that you got?
Best end (for once, I usually get bad ends first. cx)
3. Who is your favorite character?
Probably Mina.
4. Any critiques?
The voice acting was a little quiet. I had to turn the music volume down so that I could hear it. It was very well done, though!
5. What name did you used?
At first I used Zanthe, but when I realized the MC was supposed to be a guy, I used Tristan for all of the other playthroughs. (Tristan and Mina just sounded cute together, hehe)
6. What is the nickname that you used?
Z and then Tris
7. What is the Main heroine's name?
Mina. c:
8. Any questions?
How many endings are there? I got the Best End, the Good End, and the Bad End, but I can't seem to find the Developer's Notes or the Fan Art Gallery.
9. Any comments?
This game is just the most adorable thing ever. cx The best end was super cute, and I loved the background for that end.
Thanks Zelan! There are 4 ends!
You have to unlock the true end. :)
Thanks Zelan!
Ahh, so I'm missing an end! I'll keep trying for that, then, but I might need a walkthrough later if I can't figure it out. cx

EDIT: I got it! :D The developer notes were super cool! But you can't have my potato chips. Take all of the Nutella you want, though. ^_^ This game, even though it is short, is polished and really well done and I enjoyed it a lot! Congratulations to the whole team on completing the game.
I will have your potato chips. Thanks Zelan! :)
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#23 Post by MimirollCookie » Thu Mar 31, 2016 8:32 am

Hey! A version 1.1 will come your way! :D
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-Minor fix bugs! (Excluding the "i" problem. :()
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#24 Post by Dark Sentinel » Thu Mar 31, 2016 6:47 pm

Q1. Did you liked the plot?
A1: Yes. It was sort of too sweet for me (I prefer more grim stuff), but I enjoyed it.
Q2. What is the first ending that you got?
A2: Bad end, predictable.
Q3. Who is your favorite character?
A3: Mina, obviously.
Q4. Any critiques?
A4: Not really.
Q5. What name did you used?
A5: My reallife name I don't want to disclose.
Q6. What is the nickname that you used?
A6: Comet.
Q7. What is the Main heroine's name?
A7: May I drop this question?
Q8. Any questions?
A8: Not really, I guess.
Q9. Any comments?
A9: I salute you on finishing the novel before the deadline.
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#25 Post by MimirollCookie » Thu Mar 31, 2016 8:09 pm

Dark Sentinel wrote:Q1. Did you liked the plot?
A1: Yes. It was sort of too sweet for me (I prefer more grim stuff), but I enjoyed it.
Q2. What is the first ending that you got?
A2: Bad end, predictable.
Q3. Who is your favorite character?
A3: Mina, obviously.
Q4. Any critiques?
A4: Not really.
Q5. What name did you used?
A5: My reallife name I don't want to disclose.
Q6. What is the nickname that you used?
A6: Comet.
Q7. What is the Main heroine's name?
A7: May I drop this question?
Q8. Any questions?
A8: Not really, I guess.
Q9. Any comments?
A9: I salute you on finishing the novel before the deadline.
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#26 Post by MimirollCookie » Fri Apr 01, 2016 6:04 am

Please check out the dev's notes. :>
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#27 Post by Kokoro Hane » Fri Apr 01, 2016 12:32 pm

Downloaded it a couple days ago or so, we'll definitely have a playthrough of this! I played a little bit of it already, and it's cute so far!
Also Trina is doing an excellent job, she's also voicing the main of my game lol.
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#28 Post by MimirollCookie » Fri Apr 01, 2016 7:46 pm

Thanks Kokoro Hane! :D
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#29 Post by KuroMitsuki » Fri Apr 01, 2016 8:19 pm

1. Did you liked the plot?
It was short and sweet. Decent, I'd say. :)
2. What is the first ending that you got?
Best Ending
3. Who is your favorite character?
Myself XD Jk, I guess it'd have to be Mina :P
4. Any critiques?
The only thing I can really point out are grammatical errors and the like. Also, the music often played over the voice acting. Besides that, no. :)
5. What name did you used?
Nicole, which got weird when she mentioned a guy, but that was my own mistake.
6. What is the nickname that you used?
Nikoru for some strange reason.
7. What is the Main heroine's name?
Mina
8. Any questions?
Nope :P
9. Any comments?
Ah yes, the artwork and voice acting were great :D

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#30 Post by MimirollCookie » Fri Apr 01, 2016 9:02 pm

KuroMitsuki wrote:1. Did you liked the plot?
It was short and sweet. Decent, I'd say. :)
2. What is the first ending that you got?
Best Ending
3. Who is your favorite character?
Myself XD Jk, I guess it'd have to be Mina :P
4. Any critiques?
The only thing I can really point out are grammatical errors and the like. Also, the music often played over the voice acting. Besides that, no. :)
5. What name did you used?
Nicole, which got weird when she mentioned a guy, but that was my own mistake.
6. What is the nickname that you used?
Nikoru for some strange reason.
7. What is the Main heroine's name?
Mina
8. Any questions?
Nope :P
9. Any comments?
Ah yes, the artwork and voice acting were great :D
Hey there! Thanks for the reply!! I still haven't post Version 1.1 because my internet's slow. :?
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