Hey, I'm sorry that this is a really late feedback. ^^; RL kidnapped me and I got sick for awhile. Anyways, I played this like a few days after you released the game. But only got to type up a response today, although I did typed down a few notes as I played the game, I might mess up on some things? I can't remember everything in total clear details, nonetheless I will talk about what I got and what stood out to me. ^_^
Despite what you say about your writing, I don't think it was terrible and that if there was more time given to develop the game, it could be polish a bit more. Writing was actually pretty good. I could relate to Mia with how she acted and felt in math class. Lol. We have similar thoughts. I'm even terrible at naming... ^^; But well... I tolerate puns better than Mia. hahaha. There were a few minor writing errors but it wasn't bad for me. I enjoyed the puns and liked the cheesy humor:)
The first route I went on was Triangle.
I admit that I felt bad for choosing Triangle when I realize that I was forcing him on the date. I was just so excited to play the game before I realize what was happening. ^^; But I'm glad Star said sorry. I admit at one point the back and forth dialogue between Star and Triangle began to make me sigh but I expected it, plus it was cute overall in the end. Also it conveyed very well how Star and Triangle felt. I liked the cuteness of Triangle changing colors, it was nice to see the visual for it.
I found it so cute that during Square's route,
he did a very Blook-like (Undertale) thing. I actually went "omg!" when it happened. ^^
I find it fits Circle so well to be
a female for a couple of reasons. I also like that Star and Circle connected and got along very well. And that Star feel like she could relate to Circle. I do in a way like the bit of backstory to Circle too.
Maybe I'm overthinking it but personally, I feel Circle in a way is a pretty well written character. ^^
The music seems to fit the laidback funny scene and the silliness of the game. I do like one particular music that sounded
like a music box, the one used in your notes and Circle telling Star about her backstory.
I was pretty sad that there wasn't anymore hi-jinks and that it wasn't longer, especially since I think there was so many possibilities, but I understand how stressful it was for you to make this game plus time constraints.
For a bit of random comments:
-I can relate very well with overthinking too much. orz
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Yes, Mia, yes, I came back again despite playing all three routes, I came back for more puns. lol. (well, mostly to skip around and quickly refresh memory but puns are always welcome.^_^)
At one point pf the game, I wrote that it felt like playing the game was similar to rambling for fun with a friend. It was laidback, cute, kinda fun, and relatable for me.
This game has potential
and it makes me think of an idea of why there was like a crossover between her daydream and reality, just for fun. ^^
Gotta go now but congrats for pushing on with your best effort and releasing the game! You should be very proud! ^_^
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