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After Guardian Angel: A Kinetic Novel [Remake] [FREE]
Posted: Fri Feb 24, 2017 9:05 pm
by zhaie
Download Link: https://zhaieyuemn.itch.io/after-guardian-angel-remake
(Available for Android/PC)
If you have any reviews or violent reactions about this one, please do tell me. I would like to see it OvO);;
Thank you very much and have a good day, everyone! :'D
Few screenies:
Re: After Guardian Angel: A Kinetic Novel [Remake] [FREE]
Posted: Sat Feb 25, 2017 11:20 am
by sanashi27
I usually don't download Kinetic Novels (i prefer actual games) pero I'll make an exception for this kasi ikaw gumawa. I enjoyed Rewound after all. ^_^
Bibigay ko review ko pag natapos ko nang makita.
Re: After Guardian Angel: A Kinetic Novel [Remake] [FREE]
Posted: Sat Feb 25, 2017 12:24 pm
by zhaie
sanashi27 wrote:I usually don't download Kinetic Novels (i prefer actual games) pero I'll make an exception for this kasi ikaw gumawa. I enjoyed Rewound after all. ^_^
Bibigay ko review ko pag natapos ko nang makita.
Thank you! Appreciated haha
Re: After Guardian Angel: A Kinetic Novel [Remake] [FREE]
Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2017 9:01 am
by sanashi27
Played it. Merong mga grammatical errors pero okay lang dahil hindi naman nagpapalito sa kwento. Cute yung mga sprite (ikaw ba gumawa?). Anyways, it was a nice and sweet story. I saw the twist before it happened (I've seen stuff like that before) but it's still nice. I'm happy how it ended.
Re: After Guardian Angel: A Kinetic Novel [Remake] [FREE]
Posted: Wed Mar 01, 2017 10:19 am
by zhaie
sanashi27 wrote:Played it. Merong mga grammatical errors pero okay lang dahil hindi naman nagpapalito sa kwento. Cute yung mga sprite (ikaw ba gumawa?). Anyways, it was a nice and sweet story. I saw the twist before it happened (I've seen stuff like that before) but it's still nice. I'm happy how it ended.
Thank you for playing!
Yes. I draw those sprites.
Reason why I don't wanna draw the sprites hahaha
But I think it's slightly better than the first version last 3 years ago x'D
Re: After Guardian Angel: A Kinetic Novel [Remake] [FREE]
Posted: Wed Mar 01, 2017 10:00 pm
by Kokoro Hane
I got to playing this and let me say, this was such a cute, sweet story. Haha, I love Ren's thought "Bored people sure do amazing things" lol. But anyway, my thoughts;
This made me CRY! I have not cried this hard over a story in awhile. I loved Ai's optimism and the fact that her wishes were granted an that Ren got to see her again. While I kinda guessed Ai was someone he knew when he was human, I did not expect Ai to live. I totally expected for him just to take her soul and the end, or maybe she turns into a Death God, so that was still a twist to me. But yeah, this story was so sweet and I loved that little kiss they shared, even if it was technically procedure. Though I think when she kissed him she may or may not have known that. Either way, I loved it! It was a sweet story about promises and wishes and I loved it~
I did notice issues with grammar, but it wasn't too distracting oddly enough. Also, the Diary section doesn't work? Everything is just blank squares still xD
Re: After Guardian Angel: A Kinetic Novel [Remake] [FREE]
Posted: Fri Mar 03, 2017 10:31 pm
by AsHLeX
@Kokoro Hane: I believe the diary section in actually the loading screen.
"Bored people sure do amazing things." I laughed so hard at that
The story was really nice ^^ I'm glad I read it.
I even cried a little bit at the end.
Re: After Guardian Angel: A Kinetic Novel [Remake] [FREE]
Posted: Sat Mar 04, 2017 5:13 pm
by Kokoro Hane
AsHLeX wrote:@Kokoro Hane: I believe the diary section in actually the loading screen.
Ah! That would explain a lot xD
Haha, thank you!
Re: After Guardian Angel: A Kinetic Novel [Remake] [FREE]
Posted: Thu May 04, 2017 1:17 am
by zhaie
I reuploaded a new one with probably less grammatical errors. x'D
Re: After Guardian Angel: A Kinetic Novel [Remake] [FREE]
Posted: Thu May 04, 2017 1:22 am
by zhaie
Kokoro Hane wrote:I got to playing this and let me say, this was such a cute, sweet story. Haha, I love Ren's thought "Bored people sure do amazing things" lol. But anyway, my thoughts;
This made me CRY! I have not cried this hard over a story in awhile. I loved Ai's optimism and the fact that her wishes were granted an that Ren got to see her again. While I kinda guessed Ai was someone he knew when he was human, I did not expect Ai to live. I totally expected for him just to take her soul and the end, or maybe she turns into a Death God, so that was still a twist to me. But yeah, this story was so sweet and I loved that little kiss they shared, even if it was technically procedure. Though I think when she kissed him she may or may not have known that. Either way, I loved it! It was a sweet story about promises and wishes and I loved it~
I did notice issues with grammar, but it wasn't too distracting oddly enough. Also, the Diary section doesn't work? Everything is just blank squares still xD
Thank you very much for playing! I'm happy that you liked it. I'm not sure if I can pull off writing something dramatic but I guess it turned out fine! Thank you so much hehe Very much appreciated! :">
I was busy with few stuff, but I think I fixed the grammar issues with the new version. I'm so sorry about that x'D
About the diary, [EDIT] I used the term 'Diary" instead of 'Load' since it's more child-like that way x'D
I'm sorry if it's confusing. I also got confused. x'D
Re: After Guardian Angel: A Kinetic Novel [Remake] [FREE]
Posted: Thu May 04, 2017 1:24 am
by zhaie
AsHLeX wrote:@Kokoro Hane: I believe the diary section in actually the loading screen.
"Bored people sure do amazing things." I laughed so hard at that
The story was really nice ^^ I'm glad I read it.
I even cried a little bit at the end.
EDIT: The Diary is the LOAD/SAVE screen. I almost forgot lmao! I thought we're talking abt the extra corner welp.
And bored people really do unique things =v=)d
Thank you very much for playing! YEY ^O^)/
