I finished all of the endings! ^_^
It was scarier than I thought it would be! The first ending I got was the one with the car crash, and I almost jumped off the couch because I was so startled.
My favorite ending was Once Upon A Time - it was the happiest, in my opinion. Luke met Maquiling and got her message of protecting nature, but he still went home to live his life and have his own children. ^_^
I thought it was amazing how you left litter hints to tie each ending together! Like how the car crash ending mentions the resort, and the mountain looking like Maquiling, and the Once Upon A Time ending mentioned that "grandma" had met Maquiling while the mother says so in another route. Seriously, I'm so impressed by how you did that! It's not easy to do it well, but I felt like I was putting together pieces of a puzzle while I played each ending.
The CGs were so pretty as well! I think my favorite was the one that went with the With the Fairy ending.
I loved learning about the mythology that it was based on in the Author's Notes! I don't know anything about Filipino traditions or mythology, but I know there are a lot of people from the Philippines on this forum and I think it's so cool to see them all talk about their culture. (I haven't actually seen Moana yet... I probably should.)
After all of that gushing, I do have a couple of criticisms:
-There were some parts where there was no music for a long time. It's usually a good idea to have background music as often as you can in visual novels, and save silence for parts where the silence emphasizes the situation. However, the places that you did include music were great choices! owo
-There were a lot of grammar mistakes, but that is understandable since English isn't your first language. New languages are hard. >.< I've tried to write stories in Spanish before and they're... kind of a mess, haha. I can find all of them for you if you want to fix them, or if you'd rather leave them be that's fine too. c: I would suggest finding people who are willing to proofread for your future projects so that you can eliminate most of those errors. Even though the grammar was off, though, the story itself was fantastic! I think if you put out a version in your native language, it would show off your skills even more.
-In the With the Fairy ending, the perspective switching can get kind of confusing. I think it was a good idea to use it because it gives all of those points of view, but it would make it easier to follow to have a label for who's narrating. ^_^
I really enjoyed your VN! ^_^ I hope to play more from you someday.