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Visual Novel, Noir, 1 hour
A travelling con man comes to town looking to cheat his way into easy money. He instead finds something unexpected when he happens upon a woman from his past.
Completed for NaNoRenO 2017. Any feedback you provide would be most appreciated. Thank you for reading.
Edit: Updated to version 1.1. Typos corrected and some minor technical improvements implemented.
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Interesting black and white look!
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I played this game! Sorry you hadn't gotten any feedback here yet.
I really loved the dilemma of the main character that he loves the gambling life but he only wants the girl if she turns back from going straight. It was a nice reveal at the end that she'd genuinely grown up and moved on and was happy with her straight laced man.
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I enjoyed this game - the b&w style was great as was the choice of background music throughout.
There were maybe some parts of the story where it moved quite quickly for me, I think from memory that was in the second half of my playthrough. But not so much as to be majorly jarring or anything!
Interesting game, I look forward to your future works!
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