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Poker Cheat [Noir][NaNo17]

Posted: Thu Apr 06, 2017 1:53 am
by petejohnwilson
Visual Novel, Noir, 1 hour
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Mac Mirror
A travelling con man comes to town looking to cheat his way into easy money. He instead finds something unexpected when he happens upon a woman from his past.

Completed for NaNoRenO 2017. Any feedback you provide would be most appreciated. Thank you for reading.

Writing/Programming: petejohnwilson
Sprites: Konett


Edit: Updated to version 1.1. Typos corrected and some minor technical improvements implemented.

Re: Poker Cheat [Noir][NaNo17]

Posted: Mon May 08, 2017 11:56 pm
by XianXian
Interesting black and white look!

Re: Poker Cheat [Noir][NaNo17]

Posted: Tue May 09, 2017 7:17 pm
by Godline
I played this game! Sorry you hadn't gotten any feedback here yet.
I really loved the dilemma of the main character that he loves the gambling life but he only wants the girl if she turns back from going straight. It was a nice reveal at the end that she'd genuinely grown up and moved on and was happy with her straight laced man.

Awesome job!

Re: Poker Cheat [Noir][NaNo17]

Posted: Tue May 16, 2017 12:52 pm
by paradigmshifty
I enjoyed this game - the b&w style was great as was the choice of background music throughout.
There were maybe some parts of the story where it moved quite quickly for me, I think from memory that was in the second half of my playthrough. But not so much as to be majorly jarring or anything!
Interesting game, I look forward to your future works!