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PostPosted: Thu Apr 06, 2017 1:53 am 
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Visual Novel, Noir, 1 hour

A travelling con man comes to town looking to cheat his way into easy money. He instead finds something unexpected when he happens upon a woman from his past.

Completed for NaNoRenO 2017. Any feedback you provide would be most appreciated. Thank you for reading.

Writing/Programming: petejohnwilson
Sprites: Konett




Edit: Updated to version 1.1. Typos corrected and some minor technical improvements implemented.

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PostPosted: Mon May 08, 2017 11:56 pm 
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Joined: Thu Mar 30, 2017 9:25 pm
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Interesting black and white look!

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PostPosted: Tue May 09, 2017 7:17 pm 
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Joined: Fri Jun 27, 2014 12:26 am
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Completed: Wanted: Dragon, Kaitlyn in Chinaland, The Encounter, Paranormal Teens
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I played this game! Sorry you hadn't gotten any feedback here yet.
I really loved the dilemma of the main character that he loves the gambling life but he only wants the girl if she turns back from going straight. It was a nice reveal at the end that she'd genuinely grown up and moved on and was happy with her straight laced man.

Awesome job!

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PostPosted: Tue May 16, 2017 12:52 pm 
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Joined: Tue Feb 24, 2015 8:14 am
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Completed: New Pisces (nano15) For Ambergris (suno15) Void Id (nobrainerifjam) Connection Pools (nano16) Apartment Complex (suno16)
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I enjoyed this game - the b&w style was great as was the choice of background music throughout.

There were maybe some parts of the story where it moved quite quickly for me, I think from memory that was in the second half of my playthrough. But not so much as to be majorly jarring or anything!

Interesting game, I look forward to your future works!

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past projects- New Pisces (nano15). For Ambergris (sunofes 2015). Void Id (nobrainerifjam 2015). Connection Pools (nano16). Apartment Complex (sunofes 2016). blog at http://www.sleepyagents.co.uk
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