I have finally completed playing, and I must say, it was an interesting story!
I shall wrap around in spoiler tags for obvious reasons;
I REALLY loved the interactions between the director and the interesting characters he met. They all had interesting stories. Helen's was so sad, Harry's was a bit hard to follow, and Lily's.... that one SHOCKED me. I did NOT expect something so horrifying and intense! But most of all, THE ENDING TWIST! When George kept going around and nobody knew who Helen or Harry was, I was like... whoa was is going on here? And then, to find out it was LAURA all along... wow! I did NOT see that coming! I love how George described her character portrayals like a personal performance for his eyes only, it was such a sweet ending too, that kissing CG was precious and I really loved that George and Laura were happy in the end!
Only issues was there was still a lot of grammar errors, which made it quite distraction for the English translation. There were some sentences that were perfect, and others that were quite odd, but aside from that it was still a very good story! Also, thank you very much for using my voice clips!
Oh, forgot to mention... there were a couple sentences that remained untranslated so since I do not understand Spanish, I had no idea what it said lol. Also, when I hit S for screenshot an error message comes up, so I am forced to quit the game but the screenshots still took, so I can send you the two screenshots if you'd like to fix the two unstranslated sentences.