If One Thing Changed [FREE][Feelings] Disclaimer added

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If One Thing Changed [FREE][Feelings] Disclaimer added

#1 Post by kahmehkahzeh » Sun Apr 30, 2017 1:41 pm

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Available now on itch.io PC-ANDROID-MAC-LINUX-
https://kahmehkahzeh.itch.io/if-one-thing-changed

Subscribers believed I could charge for this but from going to sleep and waking up I decided that people can pay if they want to.
Thanks to all of the help I received from these forums I managed to assemble my game... or rather an Experience

This game is a text based RenP'y game using sounds and your mind... and is rather short about 30 minutes play time.
and contains 3 different endings.

This game is a realistic linear story that has 3 different endings depending on your choices.

I cannot provide screenshots as it is only text, and I can't provide much detail as well... I want to give no info on the game.

It may contain bothersome situations or content for some, but nothing in here is adulterated(sexual nature)

I still have some spelling edits to make as well as I created a 4th ending which I will release as soon as I get a couple items together.

So if you would be so kind to experience this, and post a non spoiler review it would help me out a lot.

And if you even read this far,

you need to at least get the good and bad ending to experience this to its fullest.
I mean you have nothing to lose playing it at least once.

https://discord.gg/FP5dERy - Direct link to chat on discord about this
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#2 Post by kahmehkahzeh » Wed May 03, 2017 4:38 pm

So far the feedback I have been getting is that this game is breaking people... So I will add the disclaimer here

This game is 100% made up, nothing in here is from my experiences or anyone else

AND THIS MAY CONTAIN SITUATIONS THAT WILL MAKE YOU FEEL UNCOMFORTABLE! (no nudity or adult content in this game)
So people prone to deep feelings, be warned...

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#3 Post by Imperf3kt » Wed May 03, 2017 5:35 pm

I'm hoping to get around to this on the weekend. Not much will break me ╮( ˘ 、 ˘ )╭
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#4 Post by kahmehkahzeh » Wed May 03, 2017 6:11 pm

I hope you are that durable @_@, I hope you aim for all the endings :P

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#5 Post by kahmehkahzeh » Thu May 04, 2017 6:50 am

Update 0.958

ADDED MAC LINUX AND ANDROID VERSIONS - Need people to test!
Fixed Android bug that showed wrong size text and textbox for cellphones
Fixed all spelling errors reported or found. (please report more if found)
Added a silent sound so if you skip past sounds it will be quiet instead of playing the sound.(when trying for all endings)
Delayed chime by 2 seconds allowing you to skip past quieter
Headphone recommendation added (yes headphones make a difference)

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#6 Post by schivafrecce » Thu May 04, 2017 12:49 pm

Played it :) It was an interesting concept, really creative.
I didn't break, luckily! Probably because I couldn't fully empathize with all the "bad experiences" happened to her - but that's just because I made different life/social choices when I was younger and also because I'm not a drinker...so don't take this as a critique. BTW, the part with the cab driver...I practically cheered! I seriously want to marry that man, whoever he is! And then, the ending...nice twist :)
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#7 Post by sunaro » Thu May 04, 2017 3:43 pm

can't even extract it normally, full of "viruses"

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#8 Post by kahmehkahzeh » Thu May 04, 2017 3:51 pm

@schivafrecce
Did you get all 3 endings or just one? if so which one?
And thank you for letting me know this doesn't break everyone :D Glad you enjoyed it
sunaro wrote:can't even extract it normally, full of "viruses"
That is a load of bull... >.> why would you even lie like that...

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#9 Post by Imperf3kt » Thu May 04, 2017 4:38 pm

Probably an antivirus playing up. Some do that with Ren'Py stuff.
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#10 Post by schivafrecce » Fri May 05, 2017 11:23 am

[quote="kahmehkahzeh"]@schivafrecce
Did you get all 3 endings or just one? if so which one?
And thank you for letting me know this doesn't break everyone :D Glad you enjoyed it

I played 2 endings
first I got the one were she wishes for her parents to let her die, then I tried all the bad decisions and got the bad ending
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#11 Post by kahmehkahzeh » Fri May 05, 2017 7:42 pm

schivafrecce wrote:
kahmehkahzeh wrote:@schivafrecce
Did you get all 3 endings or just one? if so which one?
And thank you for letting me know this doesn't break everyone :D Glad you enjoyed it

I played 2 endings
first I got the one were she wishes for her parents to let her die, then I tried all the bad decisions and got the bad ending
Oh so you got the normal ending and the bad one
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if you got the normal ending it means you were 1 question away from good ending

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#12 Post by schivafrecce » Sat May 06, 2017 2:08 pm

Oh so you got the normal ending and the bad one
well
if you got the normal ending it means you were 1 question away from good ending
Ok, after reading this I went back and finally got the good ending :)
It was really touching...
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#13 Post by kahmehkahzeh » Sat May 06, 2017 10:20 pm

schivafrecce wrote:
Oh so you got the normal ending and the bad one
well
if you got the normal ending it means you were 1 question away from good ending
Ok, after reading this I went back and finally got the good ending :)
It was really touching...
I hope that made the game for you :D, thank you so much for playing ^_^

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#14 Post by anu » Wed May 24, 2017 2:32 am

This game really caught my feelings.
I felt kinda sad when I played this. But don't worry, I enjoyed it!
Since this doesn't have any pictures, the game was really deep. For me.
Fantastic!
Hey, hey.
Guess if I am really a silly writer.

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