String of Fates [Free][Romance]

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String of Fates [Free][Romance]

#1 Post by reddlark » Thu Aug 24, 2017 11:11 pm


A short 1-2 hour game where you try to help a guy confess to his crush for Valentine's Day ❤

It's pretty cheesy... really really cheesy.
It mostly serves as an introduction to a group of characters I have.

>>15k words
>>12 endings (A guide for how to get all the endings is included in the game's directory as flowchart.png)
>>Extra content upon completion, CGs and character profiles that unlock as they're encountered

This was made back in late February for Valentine's (with various bug fixes and a lot of updates rolled out months after) but I didn't really advertise it much anywhere. Some friends told me to post here, so here I am! This is my first VN, I'm hoping to take what I learned and expand on it in further projects.

For anyone that plays, let me know what you think! Were you surprised by anything? Got characters you like? Dislike? Find annoying?
(honestly, a lot were written for that last category)

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Re: String of Fates [Free][Romance]

#2 Post by Zelan » Fri Sep 08, 2017 9:15 pm

Oh my gosh, I can't believe that you have no comments on this thread yet! The art is amazing, I love the style that you used. And just based on that last screenshot over on, it looks like the writing is just as good. ^_^

I have pretty much no free time to sit and play a game, but I'm really, really hoping that I can make some because I want to play this game, like, now.

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Re: String of Fates [Free][Romance]

#3 Post by Awiola » Sun Oct 08, 2017 2:02 pm

That was fun. I like that each choice [except one at the end] determined another ending. Thanks to this seeking for other endings wasn't boring at all [especially compared to games where you have bazillion choices to make and only two endings ._.].
Some plots were very unexpected - for example tomato guy - but this kind of weird humour [the group of sailor uniforms] is just great.
So, yeah, I like this game. Almost all characters too but Princess and Shiva-girl was kind of annoying probably because of their 'robotic thinking'.
My english is pretty horrible c: Honest Critique

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Re: String of Fates [Free][Romance]

#4 Post by Moonimations » Wed Jan 10, 2018 1:36 pm

Hello I wanna tell you this game is so cute and amazing. I loved playing it!! I adore the characters. The writing was on-point too I love the humour.
During the ending where ya become a star I started suspecting that yes Jett likes Andy buT I thought the game was baiting me-- I was tryin if I could let them end up together in one ending, but failed. So when I tried the 'stop resetting' thing I was so shook, in a good way, when it was made canon!! Same for the girls I suspected that already so whoA

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Re: String of Fates [Free][Romance]

#5 Post by ianrenton » Thu Jan 11, 2018 3:33 pm

Great game and awesome art. Love it. And I agree with Aviola - Princess was a bit annoying :)

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