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2 months of development...
....My first game:
Amanda, the protagonist, travels back in time and meets her first crush and former teacher Nelly.
-770 dialogue blocks
Sprites: toki https://toki-production.itch.io/
BGs: Mugenjohncel, Sharean Morishita and BCS
SFX: "phone_cellular.mp3" by www.freesoundeffects.com
"City-Park-Ambience-2.mp3", "Edge-of-Ocean.mp3" and "SynthChime7.mp3" by Eric Matyas www.soundimage.org
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- Joined: Thu Feb 09, 2017 10:29 pm
- Completed: No Other Medicine
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- Location: Canada
Congratulations on finishing your first VN! I'm definitely intrigued by the combination of yuri and time travel, so I'll have to check it out sometime.
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- Joined: Tue Oct 31, 2017 6:38 pm
Just played this, and thought it was pretty good! Short and sweet. Good work!
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I liked this game. I enjoyed playing it even though it did contain some mistakes.
For example, 'holydays' should have been 'holidays.'
But making a few mistakes isn't such a terrible thing. I still had a nice time reading about the relationship between Amanda and Nelly. Though Future Amanda meeting Young Amanda was more interesting to me.
I also felt that the ending where Young Amanda helped her future self return to her own time was more realistic than what I think was supposed to be the happiest ending. It actually wasn't entirely happy since you know they will have to separate... If only Future Amanda and Future Nelly could meet and then be happy...
"When people don't express themselves, they die one piece at a time." -Laurie Halse Anderson
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That was a really cute story, I found it really relaxing to read through. I should have kept the good end for last though as wow, some of those bad ends are bleak @_@
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