I bought the full version of the game and I was super, super impressed with it! You did a great job at making the game unsettling right from the start - the Viscount's repeated requests for you to come closer, and the blank stare that almost felt like he was looking through the screen at me, were absolutely fantastic. (I also did not expect at all the reason behind this... it was a very clever twist, well done.)
I liked that the end of the story was about the airing of secrets and the characters' acceptance of one another; they all went through a lot to get to that point, but at least by the end they were able to rest easy, in one way or another. My only complaint with the story would be that it felt a bit short - I think there should have been more focus placed on the doll as a threat, as it didn't really stick around for that long (though it did do a lot of damage).
I also just have to mention the art - the sprites were gorgeous, and there was such a great variety! I was also just floored by the GUI. It was flawlessly optimized for the mobile platform and I think other VNs should take a cue from this game when designing their GUI.