Angelic Orbs - Broken Memories - ver. 1.1 up!

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Re: Angelic Orbs - Broken Memories - ver. 1.1 up!

#31 Post by Ellie » Sun May 31, 2009 11:57 am

It's working for me. =)
I'll let you know what I think of Tia's endings soon.
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#32 Post by Vatina » Sun May 31, 2009 1:19 pm

Phew, that's nice to hear! Hopefully there won't be any more problems.
Taleweaver wrote:A very compelling adventure story... I especially like the fact that you, as a player, don't know all about the situation of the protagonist from the start and only learn it later in the game when the protagonist reveals it to other people. A nice catch that increases suspense!

What I didn't like is the "one sentence per click" style in the NVL parts. If you go for NVL style, you needn't hesitate to go for longer passages of text - they are much easier to read that way and much more "literary."
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
And yeah, I'll try to remember that last part, I didn't think too much about doing it differently during the NVL parts.

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#33 Post by vasudaprime » Sun May 31, 2009 4:54 pm

The 1.1 version worked for me as well :). It was an enjoyable game. This is probably a: "it's up to you to decide question", but...
Did Kevin actually manage to find his friends at the end?

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#34 Post by Victoria » Tue Jun 02, 2009 6:57 pm

WoW, I liked it =)
I actually found all the pictures in the gallery, but I can't found Yoko's fifth. Why is that so?
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#35 Post by Vatina » Wed Jun 03, 2009 2:37 am

Victoria wrote:WoW, I liked it =)
I actually found all the pictures in the gallery, but I can't found Yoko's fifth. Why is that so?
Yoko's fifth is a hidden cg, and kind of hard to find. She's the only one to have a hidden cg, and it requires for you to score all 'points' possible with her. Then something extra will happen in the mansion...
I wonder if anyone will get it :P

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#36 Post by Vatina » Wed Jun 03, 2009 2:38 am

vasudaprime wrote:The 1.1 version worked for me as well :). It was an enjoyable game. This is probably a: "it's up to you to decide question", but...
Did Kevin actually manage to find his friends at the end?
Nope, the cowards ran home :P So he meets them again after the story ends. I actually wrote a lame short story about that, wonder if I should ever post it...

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#37 Post by Victoria » Wed Jun 03, 2009 2:13 pm

I thought something like that was up XD
Hm, then I have to try every possible way.
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#38 Post by dstarsboy » Tue Jun 09, 2009 4:00 am

I finally finished the game, other than a few spelling mistakes (and maybe it could have used a little more background music) I think the game was amazing. A very good story and I found it easy to relate to the main character and what he was going through. I admit, I was a little confused in the beginning but everything came together nicely in the end.

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#39 Post by Vatina » Wed Jun 10, 2009 8:31 am

That's good to hear. Thank you for the comment :)

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#40 Post by Lyyli » Thu Jun 11, 2009 3:54 am

I have now completed Tia's path! This game was enjoyable to play ^^ Zyra was really awesome~

I have all cgs and endings but the last picture in misc in the gallery... how to you get it? :)
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#41 Post by azureXtwilight » Thu Jun 11, 2009 6:49 am

Finished it! I really love Zyra, she's so cool!
And I managed to finish Tia's too.
Now, on to YOko! :D
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#42 Post by Karasu_Noir » Thu Jun 11, 2009 7:23 am

Yoko is very cool, but Zyra wins because of the dark wings.
The story is very good overall, but somehow lacks music, maybe you could add more?
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#43 Post by KimiYoriBaka » Fri Jun 12, 2009 2:15 am

Okay, so I just got everything except the hidden cg. The story was very interesting and I definitely enjoyed it, but it seemed a little incomplete. To be honest, I felt unsatisfied with every ending. Especially, I was disappointed in not knowing that much about the character's backgrounds besides the vague glimpses from the orb. Is there any chance of perhaps a sequel that will give more info? I'm also curious who the girl with the brown hair in the beginning was.
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#44 Post by Vatina » Fri Jun 12, 2009 3:30 am

Lyyli wrote:I have all cgs and endings but the last picture in misc in the gallery... how to you get it? :)
The last one in misc, if I remember correctly, this comes together with a little short 'extra' scene that you can get a choice to watch after finishing both Tia and Yoko's good endings (the choice will come after their ending scenes)

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#45 Post by Vatina » Fri Jun 12, 2009 3:31 am

Karasu_Noir wrote:Yoko is very cool, but Zyra wins because of the dark wings.
The story is very good overall, but somehow lacks music, maybe you could add more?
Ah, so I was too economical on the music after all? xD I tried keeping it to a minimum since I was feeling bad for having Alessio do all that for me. But yeah, it probably could have benefitted with a few more tracks.

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