[short,puzzle][mac][win][linux]Maternity Camp

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[short,puzzle][mac][win][linux]Maternity Camp

#1 Post by xiaowaner » Sat Mar 09, 2019 9:29 am

Hello there!
This is a really short story about 2 girls planning to escape a camp. The default language of the game is Chinese, and you can change this in the settings!
I've uploaded the game to itch.io, please support me! And if you have any problem, don't hesitate to leave the comments!

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https://xiaowaner.itch.io/maternity-camp
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Re: [short,puzzle][mac][win][linux]Maternity Camp

#2 Post by Zelan » Sun Mar 10, 2019 12:53 am

This is a really amazing VN! It was very short, but the dystopian society that you presented in this visual novel was terrifying because it was kind of believable.

I liked the way that the story switched back and forth between the journalists interviewing the Fuhrer and the main character's experiences! It was very clever and built up the setting in a more interesting way than just regular narration.

The art is also really pretty! uwu I love the title screen.

I was expecting there to be some kind of gameplay elements because of the "puzzle" tag - I think maybe what you meant was "mystery" instead.
I was not expecting the twist ending at all!!! It was one thing to find out that the Fuhrer was a woman - I had assumed she was a man, based on her opinions, up until the point where the journalists asked her about her own accomplishments and how they were contradictory. And I was definitely surprised when Pinkie turned out to be the Fuhrer! It was a really impressive twist ending, you should be proud!
I'm really impressed that you did the translation all by yourself! There were some errors here and there, but I was always able to understand your meaning. c: Still, I would be happy to look over the English translation and refine it if you would like!

This is a really awesome project and I hope that a lot of other people play it! You should be super proud of yourself for finishing this VN. ^_^

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