Wedding Vows - a Kinetic Short Story Anthology

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#16 Post by ElviraNyx » Tue Jun 28, 2011 11:21 am

That was Beautiful!
Not to Mention, I cried like a Child.
Great Job! :)

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#17 Post by DragoonHP » Sun Jul 10, 2011 1:51 am

A lovely story... and I particularly liked the interface of the game and how you used images in it...

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#18 Post by Erisau » Mon Jul 11, 2011 12:10 am

That was a beautiful story and, like many before me, I cried.
You are very good at what you do, though it was a bit overbearing with how sweet it was. Although I kind of think it was better for it.
I don't really understand the end of Lawrence's storyline
Did he die too?
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#19 Post by D'd'D » Fri Nov 25, 2011 8:59 am

The story's so beautiful.
If only every married couple are like that.
^Impossible?

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#20 Post by facades » Sun Dec 18, 2011 11:00 pm

I really love your game! It was the first game that made me cry :cry: The format of the game is really unique. I love how you use the wedding vows as the menu to the various chapters of their lives.
I love how you wrote the story starting from their childhood ( I have a soft spot for childhood friendship stories).

I think this kinetic novel is the most meaningful game I've played so far.
I liked the various lessons I could learn from the game.. lessons related to life, marriage, love, death, etc..

It was just so sweet and beautiful! And the music was nice too. After playing the game, I felt like I was in a trance.
Thanks for making this game! :D

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#21 Post by dizzcity » Mon Feb 27, 2012 2:40 pm

Wow, it's been nearly two years since I came back to this forum. Thank you all for the lovely comments. I really appreciate it.

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#22 Post by reikolovesyou » Mon Sep 10, 2012 8:22 pm

This game was beautiful. :') I still have it on my laptop even though I finished it ages ago ^^

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#23 Post by Lire » Fri May 03, 2013 6:37 pm

It was a beautiful dream,,
And some memories pricked my eyes and there comes the tears,,
The tears wiped up and she wrote this,,
"Good work, i still like to read it sometimes.. :) "
Not enough time..
Or i'm a genius in wasting time.. :lol:

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#24 Post by philip » Sat May 11, 2013 5:57 pm

Just found this; downloaded and played it - very nice, very moving!
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#25 Post by qirien » Sat Aug 23, 2014 12:05 am

As I'm working on a VN about a newly married couple, I thought I'd play yours and see what your take on that idea was. :)
I loved how you followed the couple all through the years. Too many stories only tell about the falling-in-love part. And, yeah, even though a lot of parts felt a little sugary and expected, your details and the emotion in each scene touched me anyway. I really enjoyed it, thank you!
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#26 Post by dizzcity » Mon Aug 25, 2014 12:44 am

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Hope all goes well with your VN too.

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#27 Post by Caveat Lector » Tue Aug 26, 2014 3:46 pm

I love this also. One part in particular that really got to me was the "In sickness and in health" part:

Just contrasting the two different scenarios back-to-back--dealing with cancer in their senior years, and a simple fever in childhood. Just that contrast showing the dedication between the two across the years...can't quite describe why, but yeah, it got to me.
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#28 Post by qirien » Thu Oct 30, 2014 11:20 am

Mentioned your VN on our gaming blog:
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#29 Post by dizzcity » Fri Oct 31, 2014 3:01 am

Thank you! Glad for the notice. :)

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#30 Post by martin123 » Mon May 01, 2017 5:27 am

Remarkable!
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