[ALLBLACK. Phase 1. Chapter 3]
The journey of "Theodore Quentin" continues...who is Vicky? Why does she resembles so much with the white girl in his dream? Is she a key to uncover his past?
---------------------------------------------------------------------- ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------The journey of "Theodore Quentin" continues...who is Vicky? Why does she resembles so much with the white girl in his dream? Is she a key to uncover his past?
Last night, I woke up without being able to remember what had happened to me, as if I had just been born yesterday. But no one could also prove that "the past" is real. It's possible that I just "existed" now, and my memories were just fabricated.
This is me right now, lost, confused, and don't know where to go. Maybe I was just being born last night, but somehow, "my past" still haunted me. I can't remember it, but they said I am the one responsible who dropped the helicopter.
Fuck! If only I could remember something. I can't even remember my own name. But why?! Even though I can't remember my own name, but I can remember the one who made me like this?!
It's not only that....I'm not even sure if I'm a human being. Not after what happened today. I can stop the rain. No, it's not like I can change rain to sunny weather...I make thousand droplets of rain stop falling, hanging it in the air like defying the gravitation around me.
.... Far from the bottom of my heart, I'm sure that I have to end all of this.
My name is --------------, let me tell you my story.
This is me right now, lost, confused, and don't know where to go. Maybe I was just being born last night, but somehow, "my past" still haunted me. I can't remember it, but they said I am the one responsible who dropped the helicopter.
Fuck! If only I could remember something. I can't even remember my own name. But why?! Even though I can't remember my own name, but I can remember the one who made me like this?!
It's not only that....I'm not even sure if I'm a human being. Not after what happened today. I can stop the rain. No, it's not like I can change rain to sunny weather...I make thousand droplets of rain stop falling, hanging it in the air like defying the gravitation around me.
.... Far from the bottom of my heart, I'm sure that I have to end all of this.
My name is --------------, let me tell you my story.
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Only 2 weeks of development (again??) !
I proudly release Chapter 3 of ALLBLACK in visual novel format This chapter covers Book 1 of ALLBLACK Light Novel and is a direct continuation of Chapter 2 published before.
There are 6 chapters in total. Additional chapter will be added in the future.
Format : Kinetic Novel
Length : 10k words, about 30-40 minutes reading
Platform : PC (Windows, Mac, Linux) and Android (4.4 and up)
Original story : fsc
VN Adaptation : me
DOWNLOAD LINK
PC Version on itch.io(Windows, Mac, Linux)
Android version on Google Play (4.4 and up)
The Android version is bundled with Chapter 1 and 2.
Special thanks for the my proofreader (S.B Hunter and David Pardy) who did their best and fast to deliver this in such a short time
Like the previous chapter, I greatly appreciated honest feedback!
Here is the list of question I'd like you to answer.
1. How did you enjoy the VN overall?
2. What is your opinion about the characters so far? (mainly, the protagonist)
3. What can I improve on future release? (user-experience related)
4. If the final story is about 6 hours long, is it worth to release it as commercial? Would you willing to buy it and how much will you pay?
