Dear Elise [Linear Novel][Horror][Historical][Lovecraft]

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Dear Elise [Linear Novel][Horror][Historical][Lovecraft]

#1 Post by RedLily1104 » Mon Sep 21, 2020 1:41 pm

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A downloadable expedition...

The Louvenia, 1610
The New World awaits those with the courage and bravery to face the unknown. That is what Arielle Sauveterre had thought. Sponsored by her employer and mother figure, the wealthy Elise Claudine Beaumont, Arielle embarks on a voyage of discovery and adventure.

Accompanied by two men under Elise’s employment, Arielle seeks to uncover the secrets of both the untamed sea and the Americas. Which should be easy...

... if not for some of those secrets belonging to Elise herself.

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Dear Elise is a horror visual novel set during the Exploration Age. Made for the SCREAM SEAS jam.

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  • Art, story, programming - Red Lily
  • Made with Ren'Py
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Re: Dear Elise [Linear Novel][Horror][Historical][Lovecraft]

#2 Post by afrikanwizard » Mon Sep 21, 2020 7:14 pm

I would change the font of the character's names, or at least color-code it for each different character. I found it hard to read and tell who was talking on some instances.

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Re: Dear Elise [Linear Novel][Horror][Historical][Lovecraft]

#3 Post by RedLily1104 » Mon Sep 21, 2020 7:31 pm

Fair point. I'll mess around and see what I can come up with.

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